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No longer do you own me
***** you! My voice is my own
Myself, under control
Brought out of my early grave
These wounds on my wrists greive for me
crying red tears
My tears are those of joy
Once I though you to be a knight
you're no more then a silly boy
No longer am I taken
No longer do I hate me
My release has come, I own me
I refuse your gentle words
and your carress
I save me
I dig myself out of my grave
My freedom creates me
No longer do you hold my leash
No longer do I hide
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Can someone help me?

Contributed by Destiny on Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 10:19:58 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



No longer am I your victim
No longer do you own me
***** you! My voice is my own
Myself, under control
Brought out of my early grave
These wounds on my wrists greive for me
crying red tears
My tears are those of joy
Once I though you to be a knight
you're no more then a silly boy
No longer am I taken
No longer do I hate me
My release has come, I own me
I refuse your gentle words
and your carress
I save me
I dig myself out of my grave
My freedom creates me
No longer do you hold my leash
No longer do I hide




Copyright © Destiny ... [ 2004-07-08 22:19:58]
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Re: Can someone help me? (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 10:27:42 PM AEST
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How Cute


Re: Can someone help me? (User Rating: 1 )
by dragon on Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 10:30:43 PM AEST
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This is a very powerful poem and really good
thanks for sharing
dragon


Re: Can someone help me? (User Rating: 1 )
by MLCstar on Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 10:54:55 PM AEST
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Wonderful job. this poem is so full of strength and individuality. I love this. You wrote it so well. Fantastic Job!


Re: Can someone help me? (User Rating: 1 )
by darkfairy1188 on Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 11:04:04 PM AEST
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excellant.

~Sara


Re: Can someone help me? (User Rating: 1 )
by katyqueen35 on Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 11:23:20 PM AEST
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Very emotional write..


Re: Can someone help me? (User Rating: 1 )
by Pyrofungus on Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 12:41:58 AM AEST
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wow this is great! very powerful

please comment on my work too
Summer


Re: Can someone help me? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 12:45:10 AM AEST
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It sounds like you found the strength to help yourself. If so, bravo. If not you need to find it. Never let someone else run your life for you. You are the only one that truly knows what you need in your life. Be strong and forge ahead.

Rita




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