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A mothers sin
Is neglecting her children
A mothers mistake
Is leaving her children in heartache

Mommy why do you do this to me?
Why haven't I talked to you lately?
Mommy why are you never home?
Did you know I'm suffering from Bipolar syndrome?

Don't you even care?
Are you even aware
Of the pain I go through
Just to keep up with you?

I don't even remember the last time
You ever said anything nice
Or gave me any advice
In my eyes you have committed a crime

Just you wait and see
Someday
You'll hit replay
And dramatically ask yourself why
I chose to tell you goodbye

I love you mommy
And so do the rest of your children
Even though you've committed
A mothers sin! [comments] => 7 [counter] => 186 [topic] => 32 [informant] => WestCPunk [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 18 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

A Mothers Sin

Contributed by WestCPunk on Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 08:05:43 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

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A mothers sin
Is neglecting her children
A mothers mistake
Is leaving her children in heartache

Mommy why do you do this to me?
Why haven't I talked to you lately?
Mommy why are you never home?
Did you know I'm suffering from Bipolar syndrome?

Don't you even care?
Are you even aware
Of the pain I go through
Just to keep up with you?

I don't even remember the last time
You ever said anything nice
Or gave me any advice
In my eyes you have committed a crime

Just you wait and see
Someday
You'll hit replay
And dramatically ask yourself why
I chose to tell you goodbye

I love you mommy
And so do the rest of your children
Even though you've committed
A mothers sin!

Copyright © WestCPunk ... [ 2004-07-08 20:05:43]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: A Mothers Sin (User Rating: 1 )
by babygirl2004 on Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 08:17:25 PM AEST
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this is my worst nightmare that one of my children would write something like this because i am not with them but i do love them
this poem is so touching but it breaks my heart to read check out my poem the most precious gift once and let me know what u think

Re: A Mothers Sin (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 08:19:11 PM AEST
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I simply cannot understand a mother that can neglect her children for any reason. Even if she can't be with them she should make sure someone is there to care for and nurture them. I agree that it is a sin. One that I don't think I could forgive.

Rita

Re: A Mothers Sin (User Rating: 1 )
by RedRose on Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 09:30:25 PM AEST
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I truly agree my mother is the same never seemed to care great write

Re: A Mothers Sin (User Rating: 1 )
by darkfairy1188 on Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 11:16:36 PM AEST
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i know the feeling. my mother is never around. i've been cutting myself for years and she's never noticed. some of my friends suggest that i have depression and they don't even know about the cutting, and yet she doesnt notice.

~Darkfairy1188

Re: A Mothers Sin (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 01:34:07 AM AEST
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I sincerely agree with the comment of Rita.
venkat

Re: A Mothers Sin (User Rating: 1 )
by gery_giggles on Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 08:22:09 AM AEST
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dark poem...and so sad...
luv always

Re: A Mothers Sin (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 06:15:10 PM AEST
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This is indeed the saddest sin a mother can commit, and it's a sad thing to read about as well. You've expressed your pain very well here.
Andrew

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