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Why Not...(part 2 of my randomness...)

Contributed by trippflip on Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 06:41:48 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Maybe our lives will fade away
and we'll wonder if only we just spent a day
contemplating how we'll deal
dont you feel what i feel
way in the future we'll resent
because the times we've spent
were all just a jip
I dont know why you dont trip
you need a personality
why am i just a casuality
****************
Lost, I'm trying to figure out
what your intentions are all about
I've senced them ever sinced
you looked at me with bliss
but until a kiss *
i miss out on this
maybe you'll read this soon
and see how you made me feel in June
but all the year you've been torturing me
with false gazes of subtletility
We had our talk but i think
we should share a walk
if you know what i mean
confusing it seems

wondering of what wonders play in your head
contemplating what you meant when you said with your eyes something unspeakable
you make me feel feeble
why am i such a poet
I am a Juliet without a place to set...




Copyright © trippflip ... [ 2004-07-08 18:41:48]
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Re: Why Not...(part 2 of my randomness...) (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 04:05:35 PM AEST
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"false gazes of subtletility' is a good way of putting it when someone looks at you with meaning in their eyes but doesn't say what they seem to be thinking... Good poem. Best of luck!


Re: Why Not...(part 2 of my randomness...) (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 09:22:59 PM AEST
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Good poem....
:) :) :)
keep up the work...


Re: Why Not...(part 2 of my randomness...) (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 19th March 2006 @ 05:09:47 AM AEST
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I am impressed I love that last line...

I am a Juliet without a place to set...

J




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