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Lustful Thinking
Contributed by
Spiffyphil
on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 06:34:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I have all these feelings I sustain,
Powerful emotions, feelings you strain,
I love how i feel when im around you,
But I hate how I feel when im about to...
You dont love me like I love...
You dont need me like I need...
You love me to love...
You need me to need...
Today I woke to brighter luminous,
Flashlight upon shadowy concious,
I accept how I feel when im around you,
You dont accept how i feel when im about to...
You dont love me like I love...
You dont need me like I need...
You love me to love...
You need me to need...
I resist your seduction because i hate being used,
Its hard to explain without you being confused,
I deepen your shallow when im around you,
I should be needed, be loved, when im about to.
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Spiffyphil
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2004-07-08 18:34:59] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Lustful Thinking
(User Rating: 1 ) by 2ndChance on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 07:48:24 PM AEST (User
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Very well written, good use of the "..." It added just the right subtle touches. |
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