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Array ( [sid] => 55297 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Blood Lust [time] => 2004-07-08 12:29:49 [hometext] => This is my first stab at writing a vampire poem....... please tell me what you think?...............enjoy. [bodytext] => I have a lust for blood,
The taste feels so good,
Slipping down my throat,
Drinking from the ruby red moat.

I crave blood all day & night,
My wanting seems to win the fight,
The sweet, metallic taste,
Makes my heart throb & race.

But I don’t want to drink from you,
Your veins look so full & blue,
I must fulfil my only need,
Splice your vein & plant my seed.

I just can’t bring myself to do it,
I can’t bite your skin & make the slit,
But I must feed I know I must,
If I don’t I will turn to dust.

I sit here & I try to suppress,
Inside my head there’s a terrible mess,
It’s my love vs my addiction,
This was bound to cause friction.

You do not know my dark secret,
But for me I can not forget,
That I am indeed a vampire,
& your blood is my only desire.

If I told I would lose my love,
Who’s beauty is like that of a dove,
I adore you & love you so,
But as with my love my hunger grows.

I can’t hold on for much longer,
As my yearning becomes stronger,
Help me I need to feed,
But to do that you must bleed.

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Blood Lust

Contributed by pixie on Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 12:29:49 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I have a lust for blood,
The taste feels so good,
Slipping down my throat,
Drinking from the ruby red moat.

I crave blood all day & night,
My wanting seems to win the fight,
The sweet, metallic taste,
Makes my heart throb & race.

But I don’t want to drink from you,
Your veins look so full & blue,
I must fulfil my only need,
Splice your vein & plant my seed.

I just can’t bring myself to do it,
I can’t bite your skin & make the slit,
But I must feed I know I must,
If I don’t I will turn to dust.

I sit here & I try to suppress,
Inside my head there’s a terrible mess,
It’s my love vs my addiction,
This was bound to cause friction.

You do not know my dark secret,
But for me I can not forget,
That I am indeed a vampire,
& your blood is my only desire.

If I told I would lose my love,
Who’s beauty is like that of a dove,
I adore you & love you so,
But as with my love my hunger grows.

I can’t hold on for much longer,
As my yearning becomes stronger,
Help me I need to feed,
But to do that you must bleed.

Copyright Â© pixie ... [ 2004-07-08 12:29:49]
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Re: Blood Lust (User Rating: 1 )
by katyqueen35 on Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 01:24:50 PM AEST
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Very dark i like this alot.
great write... :-)

Re: Blood Lust (User Rating: 1 )
by Luinil on Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 01:34:50 PM AEST
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great poem! very creative and the flow is wonderful *

Re: Blood Lust (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 02:43:01 PM AEST
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My what a compassionate vampire. This is not bad at all for your first one. Keep working on them as I think you have the talent. You just need to cough up a little more darkness.

LOL,
Rita

Re: Blood Lust (User Rating: 1 )
by WestCPunk on Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 05:59:24 PM AEST
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Very interesting it's like a mixed decision and it's hard to choose one or the other. It was good i enjoyed it.
Shelbi

Re: Blood Lust (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 12:50:40 AM AEST
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I agree with the comment of Rita..so dark this is..venkat

Re: Blood Lust (User Rating: 1 )
by BlazeingHeart on Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 03:59:27 PM AEST
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For a first try at vampire poetry you have great immagination and i look forward to reading more of your poems

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