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Forever History
Contributed by
lovespoetic0518
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Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 08:38:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I'll never let you know,
The love I felt you bestow.
The essence your eyes conveyed,
Only angels have portrayed.
Liked salt to a tear,
Sweet ardor you leave,
Violins compose a melody,
My pulse is all I hear.
But your not really there,
Only in pastel memories,
Our love remains undeclared,
You and I are forever history.
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lovespoetic0518
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2004-07-08 08:38:17] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Forever History
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 12:41:42 PM AEST (User
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very beautiful, but so sad,
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Re: Forever History
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 03:33:09 PM AEST (User
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Very poignant piece of work. I am going to start watching for your work. You have talent still to be recognized. Keep writing.
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Re: Forever History
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 10:00:12 PM AEST (User
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so sad......... but an absolutely gorgeous poem:) hugs n' love nessa
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