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Has made it crumble, scorn and moan
She turns over, the Autumn leaves of Spring
Flies through the Skies, with a Bird on a wing.
And now the heavenly rays fall, on the ground, wet
from rain.
Scoops up the puddles of love and pain, but there is
nothing to gain.
When One realizes that this poem, is going no where
So now, with care, I’ll end it just here.

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GOING NO WHERE

Contributed by robertkilpatrick on Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 12:40:46 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

One has struck, and stirred the stone
Has made it crumble, scorn and moan
She turns over, the Autumn leaves of Spring
Flies through the Skies, with a Bird on a wing.
And now the heavenly rays fall, on the ground, wet
from rain.
Scoops up the puddles of love and pain, but there is
nothing to gain.
When One realizes that this poem, is going no where
So now, with care, I’ll end it just here.

© ROBERT KILPATRICK

Copyright Â© robertkilpatrick ... [ 2004-07-08 00:40:46]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: GOING NO WHERE (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 12:43:27 AM AEST
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very interesting and nice twist.

Re: GOING NO WHERE (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 12:49:58 AM AEST
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Well, that is definitely unique, to say the least. LMAO. I had to read it twice to make sure I was right about what I read.

LOL,
Rita

Re: GOING NO WHERE (User Rating: 1 )
by Gentledove on Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 01:06:39 AM AEST
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interesting. It seems to go no where and yet.....
Gentledove

Re: GOING NO WHERE (User Rating: 1 )
by Stoney1 on Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 02:34:43 AM AEST
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****shaking head in despair****muttering to himself****can't believe I clicked on this...

Re: GOING NO WHERE (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinful_Misery on Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 12:02:21 AM AEST
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That was a bit of a cool twist, and the poem was good and flowing.

Re: GOING NO WHERE (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 03:12:06 AM AEST
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Lol. Pretty intresting end. :)

Re: GOING NO WHERE (User Rating: 1 )
by darkfairy1188 on Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 08:30:42 PM AEST
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i disagree with stoney1, i liked it.

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