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Array ( [sid] => 55219 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Behind Green Eyes [time] => 2004-07-07 20:10:07 [hometext] => ~Comments appreciated~ [bodytext] => Eyes that are green
So dark yet so bright
They'll make you cringe
In the darkness of the light
There are no misconceptions
Everything that you see is true
My heart of broken dreams deepens
And you have absolutely no clue
You don't feel what I go through
You have no part in saying that you do
Because you don't know EXACTLY
What's hidden behind these green eyes
Do You!?!
They're full of drama, worthless words, hatred, lovelessness, and abuse
There are so many distraught feeelings
That hide behind a bruise
It's also not very fun to be used
Or constantly ****in accused
Not one feeling goes untouched or refused
The evil look that I can lie upon you
Will do nothing but scare you
So this is my final adieu
Only behind green eyes
Does your heart truely die!! [comments] => 6 [counter] => 190 [topic] => 66 [informant] => WestCPunk [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 30 [ratings] => 7 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => drugabuse )

Behind Green Eyes

Contributed by WestCPunk on Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 08:10:07 PM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse

Eyes that are green
So dark yet so bright
They'll make you cringe
In the darkness of the light
There are no misconceptions
Everything that you see is true
My heart of broken dreams deepens
And you have absolutely no clue
You don't feel what I go through
You have no part in saying that you do
Because you don't know EXACTLY
What's hidden behind these green eyes
Do You!?!
They're full of drama, worthless words, hatred, lovelessness, and abuse
There are so many distraught feeelings
That hide behind a bruise
It's also not very fun to be used
Or constantly ****in accused
Not one feeling goes untouched or refused
The evil look that I can lie upon you
Will do nothing but scare you
So this is my final adieu
Only behind green eyes
Does your heart truely die!!

Copyright © WestCPunk ... [ 2004-07-07 20:10:07]
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Re: Behind Green Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by katyqueen35 on Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 01:56:40 AM AEST
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I have to admit that is a pretty good write..

Re: Behind Green Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 02:56:39 AM AEST
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Ohho..what a fantastic green eyed beauty you are...I like your poem as its ending is really impressive..aah..truly I am enchanted to look into your eyes.. your voice is dramatic..Keep writing on..best of luck.
venkat

Re: Behind Green Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 03:43:39 AM AEST
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I'm not sure if you miscategorized this. There are no drug references throughout, only emotional turbulence and inner pain.

Apart from this, I believe you've expressed yourself vehemantly, and to an effective degree. It makes me almost glad my eyes aren't entirely green, and that they are a modest shade of gray, too.

Thankyou for sharing this one.

Re: Behind Green Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 03:43:43 AM AEST
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wow!
very impressive write here.
You are a unique poet and you write with obvious talent...
powerfull stuff here...
Keep writing.
I thoroughly enjoy your poetry...
luv,
_.:'~Katie~':._

Re: Behind Green Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 10:32:08 AM AEST
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I was curious when I read your title because I have very green eyes.

Very emotionally packed and very interesting to read as well.

Thank you for sharing this with all of us.

Kie

Re: Behind Green Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 05:12:29 PM AEST
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wow.. deep and chilling. liked the name, very fitting.
well written poem, good use of words.
i liked it.
Arden

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