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Array ( [sid] => 55216 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Those Four Words [time] => 2004-07-07 19:44:03 [hometext] => Diana, you will not see it coming, just as I'm planning it. You will soon see my commitment to you is forever. I love you that much and more. I will give of myself, and give all of myself to you completely to eternity. [bodytext] => Still waiting for the perfect time
When everything is right
It has to be the perfect place
Those Four Words I can’t fight.

It’s all I think of all day long
I need to plan this out
So she will see it in my eyes
True love without a doubt.

So should I plan some quiet time
Alone for just us two?
Or dinner lit by candlelight
Then would she have a clue?

‘Cause I don’t want her to suspect
What I have not implied
I want it all to be so right
Those Four Words I can’t hide.

Maybe we should take a drive
To someplace far away
So nothing else can interrupt
The things I have to say.

Maybe take her somewhere new
Pretending it’s just that
And when she least expects a thing
I’ll take my last at bat.

I’ll whisper it into her ear
And swing with all my might
Then pray her answer clears the fence
Those Four Words said tonight.

And when the moment’s finally right
Before I’m on my knee
Everything must fall in place
For her to marry me. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 310 [topic] => 35 [informant] => joker17 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 18 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SpecialOccassion )
Those Four Words

Contributed by joker17 on Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 07:44:03 PM in AEST
Topic: SpecialOccassion



Still waiting for the perfect time
When everything is right
It has to be the perfect place
Those Four Words I can’t fight.

It’s all I think of all day long
I need to plan this out
So she will see it in my eyes
True love without a doubt.

So should I plan some quiet time
Alone for just us two?
Or dinner lit by candlelight
Then would she have a clue?

‘Cause I don’t want her to suspect
What I have not implied
I want it all to be so right
Those Four Words I can’t hide.

Maybe we should take a drive
To someplace far away
So nothing else can interrupt
The things I have to say.

Maybe take her somewhere new
Pretending it’s just that
And when she least expects a thing
I’ll take my last at bat.

I’ll whisper it into her ear
And swing with all my might
Then pray her answer clears the fence
Those Four Words said tonight.

And when the moment’s finally right
Before I’m on my knee
Everything must fall in place
For her to marry me.




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Re: Those Four Words (User Rating: 1 )
by xxbreathlessx on Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 07:48:19 PM AEST
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aww that is beautiful, i really enjoyed it, i love what you did with it and its nice to see the happier side of you, i think you did a wonderful job on this (good luk!)


Re: Those Four Words (User Rating: 1 )
by Gentledove on Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 07:55:07 PM AEST
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A beautiful write. I have to say that my husband proposed to me with a poem and it melted my heart. We will be celebrating our 18th wedding anniversary on the 19th of this month. She will love it.
Gentledove


Re: Those Four Words (User Rating: 1 )
by evilfairy on Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 08:03:29 PM AEST
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joker, i had a feeling those would be the 4 words.... ;)

nicely written...as i have become accustomed. i personally think any moment that the one you love proposes in is the perfect one....


Re: Those Four Words (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 08:55:39 PM AEST
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THAT IS SOOOOOOO COOL!!!!!!! I am so happy for u man. I hope that u do so soon and that her answer is a postive one. By the way a beautiful poem. Best of luck.

Bobo (Joel)


Re: Those Four Words (User Rating: 1 )
by tifrob on Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 09:24:32 PM AEST
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This is a precious. I love it... Great Poem.

J~


Re: Those Four Words (User Rating: 1 )
by XxNights_ChildxX on Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 02:17:48 PM AEST
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awwww this poem is sooo sweet...i loved it muchos grandes....so romantic...*sighs happily* keep it up

Jenni xxoo




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