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Array ( [sid] => 55164 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ***** In My Brain [time] => 2004-07-07 11:36:39 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Can’t seem to get rid of her,
She doesn’t do things on the spur,
Her actions are pre-meditated,
Her evil tasks are contemplated.

She waits in the wings,
Plotting all her nasty things,
Why can’t she bare see me smile,
To the ***** happiness is vile.

All she knows is to destroy,
Crushing me is her one true ploy,
Was it me that created her power,
I used to back down & cower.

Now I am strong enough to fight,
& battle I will with all my might,
This is a war she will not win,
I am not ready to be beaten on a whim.

You are powerful, so am I
Never again will you see me cry,
I have strength now I have love,
I loom down on you, as I am above.

So this is to you ***** in my brain,
Try as you will , but you’ll try in vain,
You can not beat me anymore,
I’m gonna kick your arse out of the door.

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***** In My Brain

Contributed by pixie on Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 11:36:39 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Can’t seem to get rid of her,
She doesn’t do things on the spur,
Her actions are pre-meditated,
Her evil tasks are contemplated.

She waits in the wings,
Plotting all her nasty things,
Why can’t she bare see me smile,
To the ***** happiness is vile.

All she knows is to destroy,
Crushing me is her one true ploy,
Was it me that created her power,
I used to back down & cower.

Now I am strong enough to fight,
& battle I will with all my might,
This is a war she will not win,
I am not ready to be beaten on a whim.

You are powerful, so am I
Never again will you see me cry,
I have strength now I have love,
I loom down on you, as I am above.

So this is to you ***** in my brain,
Try as you will , but you’ll try in vain,
You can not beat me anymore,
I’m gonna kick your arse out of the door.

Copyright Â© pixie ... [ 2004-07-07 11:36:39]
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Re: ***** In My Brain (User Rating: 1 )
by Gentledove on Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 11:42:37 AM AEST
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I sometimes think that we all have that in our brain telling us that we can't win. I'm glad that you are fighting those thoughts. Nice write.
Gentledove

Re: ***** In My Brain (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 12:07:55 PM AEST
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you go girl!
this peom has atitude!
it's excellent!
i can see it comes straight from your soul.
and as for fighting back, don't give in!

Re: ***** In My Brain (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 01:13:14 PM AEST
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Yeah, Krissy, coming on strong. You go girl!!!!!!! Never let anything or anyone drag you down. I am so proud of you.

Hugs,
Rita

Re: ***** In My Brain (User Rating: 1 )
by Luinil on Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 01:57:54 PM AEST
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this is absolutely brilliant! trying to catch up on your work from the past week or so, but i'm very impressed with this one as always. great writing! *

Re: ***** In My Brain (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 02:44:11 PM AEST
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Rock on - great attitude. I enjoyed this

Re: ***** In My Brain (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 04:04:54 PM AEST
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Pixie, what a wonder positive poem....I know it will help others, and especially you alot!~
I love your terminology especially.....I'm gonna kick your arse out of the door!
Stay on that path, dear friend.......you're sure to end up successful.
And thank you so much for all your lovely comments on my poems.
I'm proud of you too!
Love,
ConSue
P.S. With all my computer trouble I've lost your email address please send again so I can send you my poems.....you do the same please.
csz1914@msn.com then I won't miss them!

Re: ***** In My Brain (User Rating: 1 )
by Psyche on Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 10:57:13 PM AEST
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Wow! Very motivating for destroying those self-defeating attitudes! I enjoyed this. Thank You!

Re: ***** In My Brain (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 12:41:03 AM AEST
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O.k my dear ..stay cool and strong..you will kick her surely. best of luck.venkat

Re: ***** In My Brain (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 06:05:01 AM AEST
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Attitudinal expressionism at its peak.

Pixie, you're a joy to read.

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