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Array ( [sid] => 55033 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Emotion of me [time] => 2004-07-06 17:49:54 [hometext] => I wrote this one day because I was mad at my boyfriend, but we are doing okay now [bodytext] => I don't know what to feel,
What to say,
What to hear,
What to believe,
Or what to do at this time,
Why u?,
You know I stayed faithful to you,
And trustworthy,
But then again I don't understand,
Why would you play with,
The emotion of me

Beautiful days,
The sunshine the peacful rain,
Your presence around me,
To me your a beautiful and loved blessing,
The way I feel about you,
Can't amount to how much I put up with you,
Look deep within my eyes,
So you can realize,
That I'm not a girl to play around with,
Cause I really care about our relationship,
If love is the key,
To our destiny,
Why would you play with,
The emotion of me

I have never did anything wrong,
So I sit hear and listen to repeated sad songs,
That get me caught up in crying,
Then I feel like I'm dying,
I don't know how,
You said you would never lie to me but then again you broke a vow,
I care about you so much and this is what you do,
It's just the pain I can't go through,
We are suppose to be together,
Not separated from each other forever,
I'm not giving up this easy,
Because you need to be with me,
Please let's just make it stay forever and ever,
But still I can't let you play,
With the emotion of me

Now it feels like the end,
Of what we had in the beginning,
If you loved me,
You would not lie,
And if you loved me,
You would not make me cry,
To the point where I can't stay strong,
I can't go on like this for long,
I really wan't to make things work with you,
But can I even trust you,
Again,
See you have to understand me deep down inside,
Touch my heart and my soul so u will know why,
I'm hurting so much and now I don't see,
If there is a possibility,
Of us being like we use to be,
If you keep playing with the emotion of me [comments] => 2 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Luckycharm [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

The Emotion of me

Contributed by Luckycharm on Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 05:49:54 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I don't know what to feel,
What to say,
What to hear,
What to believe,
Or what to do at this time,
Why u?,
You know I stayed faithful to you,
And trustworthy,
But then again I don't understand,
Why would you play with,
The emotion of me

Beautiful days,
The sunshine the peacful rain,
Your presence around me,
To me your a beautiful and loved blessing,
The way I feel about you,
Can't amount to how much I put up with you,
Look deep within my eyes,
So you can realize,
That I'm not a girl to play around with,
Cause I really care about our relationship,
If love is the key,
To our destiny,
Why would you play with,
The emotion of me

I have never did anything wrong,
So I sit hear and listen to repeated sad songs,
That get me caught up in crying,
Then I feel like I'm dying,
I don't know how,
You said you would never lie to me but then again you broke a vow,
I care about you so much and this is what you do,
It's just the pain I can't go through,
We are suppose to be together,
Not separated from each other forever,
I'm not giving up this easy,
Because you need to be with me,
Please let's just make it stay forever and ever,
But still I can't let you play,
With the emotion of me

Now it feels like the end,
Of what we had in the beginning,
If you loved me,
You would not lie,
And if you loved me,
You would not make me cry,
To the point where I can't stay strong,
I can't go on like this for long,
I really wan't to make things work with you,
But can I even trust you,
Again,
See you have to understand me deep down inside,
Touch my heart and my soul so u will know why,
I'm hurting so much and now I don't see,
If there is a possibility,
Of us being like we use to be,
If you keep playing with the emotion of me

Copyright © Luckycharm ... [ 2004-07-06 17:49:54]
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Re: The Emotion of me (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 02:22:00 PM AEST
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WOW luckycharm! this is so deep and emotional. i love this so much. its just beautifully sad! hope you and your bf sort things out! your so talented keep writing hun!

love hopes and hugs
Gen xx

Re: The Emotion of me (User Rating: 1 )
by skyblumoon on Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 12:38:38 PM AEST
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I'm glad someone can say how they really feel.
You're gifted at expressing yourself.

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