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Array ( [sid] => 5503 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => liar [time] => 2002-10-23 18:00:00 [hometext] => here is another messed up one i guess i hae a lot of pent up anger check it let me know what you think now i have a lot of commenting to do... [bodytext] => i mean a lot to you say?
but it seems you can't go out of your way
to say hi how are you
what am i to do
i did my part tried too hard
i fell flat on my face
no i carry the scars of you
and your lies
your fake manufactured self
you never even tried
now i would rather die
then see your smiling face
push me away when your most needed
laugh at me when i'm most heated
what goes around comes around
it will return to you 2 fold
i hope it does your lies are old
i hope no other falls for your
fake manufactured self
liar [comments] => 1 [counter] => 177 [topic] => 43 [informant] => idiotbox [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

liar

Contributed by idiotbox on Wednesday, 23rd October 2002 @ 06:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

i mean a lot to you say?
but it seems you can't go out of your way
to say hi how are you
what am i to do
i did my part tried too hard
i fell flat on my face
no i carry the scars of you
and your lies
your fake manufactured self
you never even tried
now i would rather die
then see your smiling face
push me away when your most needed
laugh at me when i'm most heated
what goes around comes around
it will return to you 2 fold
i hope it does your lies are old
i hope no other falls for your
fake manufactured self
liar

Copyright © idiotbox ... [ 2002-10-23 18:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: liar (User Rating: 1 )
by inad on Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 11:53:08 AM AEST
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The poem is very deep, I know how you feel
its a very good poem tho, keep up the great work

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