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Array ( [sid] => 55015 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Strangers/Cizinci [time] => 2004-07-06 15:00:30 [hometext] => my heart feelings are such...... [bodytext] => Why strangers come in my land
Stun me with their sweet talks
I capitulate and don´t say NO
with piece of my land,let them go

Why strangers leave out of the blue
My soil may satisfied their thirst
Maybe my soil poisoned them?
And they feel fine not to show up again

Why strangers appear in one stroke
And want to steal the soil
And with my lame wings I soar
But they don´t see my fall

Why don´t I face them with pride
And don´t force them out,
I become a king after battle,
In battle, I throw away my sword.

„Oh no, my sword, please cut my land
I won´t let them steal it any more
And then, cut me, please do that.
For I better die with honour

I won´t let the strangers and enemies
Destroy and tear apart my land,
I´ll better cover it with my own blood
Please, my sword, do it and cut straight!“

Proč přijdou cizinci do mé země,
Sladkými řečmi mě omámí,
Já poddám se a neřeknu ne
A s kusem své půdy nechám je odejít

Proč odchází cizinci znenadání,
Snad má půda zahnala jejich hlad,
Možná půda má je otráví?
A není jim hloupé se víc neozvat

Proč náhle cizinci zjeví se
A půdu ukrást chtějí
A já křídly chromými vzlétnu zase
To, že padnu, vidět nechtějí

Proč já nepostavím se hrdě
A neženu je hned,
Jsem králem vždy až po bitvě
V bitvě, zahodím svůj meč.
¨
„Oh ne, můj meči, rozsekej mou zem,
Nenechám je loupit nikdy víc,
A potom, prosím, mě rozsekej.
Se ctí lepší zmeřít.

Nenechám cizince a vetřelce
Zničit a na kusy rozervat mou zem,
Raději ji pokryju svou vlastní krví,
Tak prosím, meči, už tni a hned!“
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 169 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Aika [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => czech [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
StrangersCizinci

Contributed by Aika on Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 03:00:30 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



Why strangers come in my land
Stun me with their sweet talks
I capitulate and don´t say NO
with piece of my land,let them go

Why strangers leave out of the blue
My soil may satisfied their thirst
Maybe my soil poisoned them?
And they feel fine not to show up again

Why strangers appear in one stroke
And want to steal the soil
And with my lame wings I soar
But they don´t see my fall

Why don´t I face them with pride
And don´t force them out,
I become a king after battle,
In battle, I throw away my sword.

„Oh no, my sword, please cut my land
I won´t let them steal it any more
And then, cut me, please do that.
For I better die with honour

I won´t let the strangers and enemies
Destroy and tear apart my land,
I´ll better cover it with my own blood
Please, my sword, do it and cut straight!“

Proč přijdou cizinci do mé země,
Sladkými řečmi mě omámí,
Já poddám se a neřeknu ne
A s kusem své půdy nechám je odejít

Proč odchází cizinci znenadání,
Snad má půda zahnala jejich hlad,
Možná půda má je otráví?
A není jim hloupé se víc neozvat

Proč náhle cizinci zjeví se
A půdu ukrást chtějí
A já křídly chromými vzlétnu zase
To, že padnu, vidět nechtějí

Proč já nepostavím se hrdě
A neženu je hned,
Jsem králem vždy až po bitvě
V bitvě, zahodím svůj meč.
¨
„Oh ne, můj meči, rozsekej mou zem,
Nenechám je loupit nikdy víc,
A potom, prosím, mě rozsekej.
Se ctí lepší zmeřít.

Nenechám cizince a vetřelce
Zničit a na kusy rozervat mou zem,
Raději ji pokryju svou vlastní krví,
Tak prosím, meči, už tni a hned!“




Copyright © Aika ... [ 2004-07-06 15:00:30]
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Re: StrangersCizinci (User Rating: 1 )
by C2C on Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 03:03:19 PM AEST
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An interesting piece indeed. The poem draws me in and makes me wonder about the narrator.


Re: StrangersCizinci (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 03:30:09 PM AEST
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strong write indeed

Shari


Re: StrangersCizinci (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 11:53:33 PM AEST
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Oh my yes how sad.......do they really do this to you Aika......or is this just a very well written poem?
This is good and I understand, which is unusal for me but I still love your bright, enthusiastic, lovely and beautiful writes best!
Love
consue


Re: StrangersCizinci (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 07:44:03 AM AEST
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Very deep and moving work yet again.So many layers to you Aika, but that is your beauty.Strangers may come, but never steal the real you

steve




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