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In the End
Contributed by
_Raspberry_
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Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 11:26:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Tears fill my eyes,
As I know what I must do
Dusk fills the skies
As I begin to tell you
I open up my mouth
I feel like I'm choking,
I force the words out
Fear removes it's cloaking
The clouds release the rain
Bringing me the strength
'I don't feel the same'
A phrase thought through at length
'You just weren't ready
We were pushed way too soon
Yes, our arguments are petty
But I realize something new
My love is for who you are
But I keep pushing you to change
One day I'll push too far...
You'll become what I arrange
I hope that you will grow
To more than what I have in mind
Create yourself and show
The world what you have inside
I gave up on my perfect
Instead I tried to mould you
Trapped in an image I inflict
I've grown too tired to hold you
I think it's best we separate
I know, she holds us back
But if we stay only for her sake
It may set her life off track
I know I made a promise
We'll work a little harder
I'm only being honest
This might not go on much farther
I hope you know I love you
And pray we can stay friends
I just don't want to control you
This way of life must end...
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_Raspberry_
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2004-07-06 11:26:47]
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Re: In the End
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by Black13 on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 11:53:49 AM AEST
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Good write and it would be nice if more people felt like that last stanza.
Well done. |
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Re: In the End
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by Lionel on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 12:26:06 PM AEST
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| You are a good poet, therefore you're intelligent enough to know you have another option short of seperation. Thats right - change YOUR ways. God Bless |
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Re: In the End
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by gery_giggles on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 03:45:13 PM AEST
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sad write..and i hope everything works out..good luck
luv always |
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Re: In the End
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by WestCPunk on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 08:04:06 PM AEST
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| Great writing, yet sad. Hope all goes well! |
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Re: In the End
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 05:09:15 PM AEST
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| Well written. |
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Re: In the End
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by rao0oar on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 07:05:46 PM AEST
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| that is a wounderfull peom and i agree with black13 on the last stanza i only hope the best for you good job keep goin follow ur dreams!!!! |
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