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Contributed by
hannahbanana
on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 10:35:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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i am a little shaded
a little jaded
today sweat bubbles
on my valleyed forehead
thirst on my tongue
my sandals are chewing my heels
and i am thinking thoughts
i had before you
they are crashing
in the fine weather
blinded by the sun
that could infect my skin
if i let it
i am a lttle crazy
a little hazy
today
no further
no nearer to knowing
just stuck
thinking thoughts
i had before
i adored you.
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hannahbanana
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2004-07-06 10:35:44]
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by Monkeybones99 on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 10:49:14 AM AEST
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