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Brick

Contributed by rhei76 on Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 09:50:18 AM in AEST
Topic: Grief



i fell in love with a girl
on a jet plane
but she had to leave
way up in the sky
she had to go
and 'til this day i still cry

i fell in love with a star
so beautiful she got caught in the sky
watching down
she's the only one that makes a difference
in what i think

so i don't think to much
i don't try
cause i don't care
cause i lost myself
when my eyes fell to the skies

when that jet plane flew...



By: Dillon Rhei





Copyright © rhei76 ... [ 2004-07-06 09:50:18]
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Re: Brick (User Rating: 1 )
by Monkeybones99 on Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 10:32:00 AM AEST
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Good poem keep up the good work.


Re: Brick (User Rating: 1 )
by hannahbanana on Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 10:43:26 AM AEST
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NICE WORK. I LIKE THIS ONE LOADS AND LOADS.


Re: Brick (User Rating: 1 )
by frozensuicide on Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 05:29:54 PM AEST
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wow, thats really nice... i like it.


Re: Brick (User Rating: 1 )
by rao0oar on Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 06:14:13 PM AEST
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sounds like she was important too...one day you will feel again but until that day and after that day keep writing for u are talented




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