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Array ( [sid] => 5496 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => What am I to do? [time] => 2002-10-23 16:15:00 [hometext] => I just really need to vent so i wrote down all of the things going on in my head [bodytext] => My friends all hate each other
And I hate some of their friends too
They all are starting to forget me
It makes me think I don’t exist
My new friend stopped hanging out with me
Now her old friends took her back
Shouldn’t I be p*****?
I’m depressed
Sadness, sorrow, and grief
My self esteem has been cut in half with one swift cleave
I hate being alone
Despite the fear of large groups of people I’m prone
What am I to do?
I can’t concentrate
But I have to get through school
My problems steal my mind
When I space out I’m very hard to find
I want out! I want out! I want out!
I’ll never get out this prison of doubt
RAGE! RAGE! RAGE!
I hate the world but more so myself
I’m so sick of this town
I’m saturated by its smell
This place is a monotonous hell.
My problems have been amplified by my current state
Weakened by anger and feelings of hate.
I just don’t know how much more I can take.
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What am I to do?

Contributed by notbagheadx on Wednesday, 23rd October 2002 @ 04:15:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



My friends all hate each other
And I hate some of their friends too
They all are starting to forget me
It makes me think I don’t exist
My new friend stopped hanging out with me
Now her old friends took her back
Shouldn’t I be p*****?
I’m depressed
Sadness, sorrow, and grief
My self esteem has been cut in half with one swift cleave
I hate being alone
Despite the fear of large groups of people I’m prone
What am I to do?
I can’t concentrate
But I have to get through school
My problems steal my mind
When I space out I’m very hard to find
I want out! I want out! I want out!
I’ll never get out this prison of doubt
RAGE! RAGE! RAGE!
I hate the world but more so myself
I’m so sick of this town
I’m saturated by its smell
This place is a monotonous hell.
My problems have been amplified by my current state
Weakened by anger and feelings of hate.
I just don’t know how much more I can take.




Copyright © notbagheadx ... [ 2002-10-23 16:15:00]
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Re: What am I to do? (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 09:11:59 PM AEST
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excellent write. i felt the emotional outpour in this. hope springs eternal.




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