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Array ( [sid] => 54938 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Looking at My Life [time] => 2004-07-05 23:49:17 [hometext] => i hope you like this one, and remember READ IT SLOW!!!!! [bodytext] => I lay here looking and the fading blue sky
looking for answers written in the clouds
and knowing there are problems in this life
that need to be sorted through and understood
and while so many things are going wrong
I ignore them
and try to look at the brighter side
but at night, unnoticed and alone
in my room
I cry for those i've lost
and the hardships that've befallen me
through these changes
i've noticed many things about myself
I try and correct these wrongs
though I know i'll never be perfect
and while i'm growing up
i look through this curtian
of glitter and roses
and see the hardships ahead
that I know I need to survive
because maybe there's a light at the end of my tunnel
or maybe that's just the subway train
but I know
i need to make it for me
and others who will change me
and everything I seen
and someday, somehow
things will get better [comments] => 2 [counter] => 149 [topic] => 48 [informant] => kailadragon [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Looking at My Life

Contributed by kailadragon on Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 11:49:17 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I lay here looking and the fading blue sky
looking for answers written in the clouds
and knowing there are problems in this life
that need to be sorted through and understood
and while so many things are going wrong
I ignore them
and try to look at the brighter side
but at night, unnoticed and alone
in my room
I cry for those i've lost
and the hardships that've befallen me
through these changes
i've noticed many things about myself
I try and correct these wrongs
though I know i'll never be perfect
and while i'm growing up
i look through this curtian
of glitter and roses
and see the hardships ahead
that I know I need to survive
because maybe there's a light at the end of my tunnel
or maybe that's just the subway train
but I know
i need to make it for me
and others who will change me
and everything I seen
and someday, somehow
things will get better

Copyright © kailadragon ... [ 2004-07-05 23:49:17]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Looking at My Life (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 12:11:00 AM AEST
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With that positive attitude your life is sure to get better and I think you will make the lives of others better too. Great write.

Rita

Re: Looking at My Life (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 05:24:07 AM AEST
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a heart-touching poem.
i guess we know this this be true inside of us, it's just harder to find for some.
this i a very strong poem. it proves that you're a very strong person. if you believe in your self this much, then you will defently get there, which i'm sure you're already aware of, but i thought it woud be nice to hear from some else.
best wishes for the future.
from deathdrop.

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