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Array ( [sid] => 54937 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Another Time [time] => 2004-07-05 23:41:45 [hometext] => i just wrote this poem sometime around 1 a.m. this morning. i wrote it for my girlfriend about how i felt. [bodytext] => I heard you say no
but listen I did not
you pushed me away after
all I could do was look away
sad and angry at myself I lay on the floor
I didn't say goodnight as you walked out
forgiveness is now all that I ask of you
for me doing the one thing I said I wouldn't
but look at me now, a hypocrite on his knees
I sit at your feet, begging for your acceptance
but that will have to be another time
until you give an answer I will lay hopelessly in my bed
I will try to hold back the tears of regret and hate
and try my damnedest to not hurt myself
though with how I feel I'll most likely fail
but just know this one thing
I only hurt myself to make up for what I've done
as I hurt I feel the tears forming in my eyes
so hard do I try to keep them back
but sadness gets it's way and the tears fall to the floor
I scream I'm so sorry as a puddle forms on the ground
for once again I have hurt the one I love
I sit by the phone awaiting your call
but that will have to be another time [comments] => 2 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 48 [informant] => lonely_boy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Another Time

Contributed by lonely_boy on Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 11:41:45 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I heard you say no
but listen I did not
you pushed me away after
all I could do was look away
sad and angry at myself I lay on the floor
I didn't say goodnight as you walked out
forgiveness is now all that I ask of you
for me doing the one thing I said I wouldn't
but look at me now, a hypocrite on his knees
I sit at your feet, begging for your acceptance
but that will have to be another time
until you give an answer I will lay hopelessly in my bed
I will try to hold back the tears of regret and hate
and try my damnedest to not hurt myself
though with how I feel I'll most likely fail
but just know this one thing
I only hurt myself to make up for what I've done
as I hurt I feel the tears forming in my eyes
so hard do I try to keep them back
but sadness gets it's way and the tears fall to the floor
I scream I'm so sorry as a puddle forms on the ground
for once again I have hurt the one I love
I sit by the phone awaiting your call
but that will have to be another time

Copyright © lonely_boy ... [ 2004-07-05 23:41:45]
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Re: Another Time (User Rating: 1 )
by kailadragon on Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 12:41:03 AM AEST
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i love the raw emotion in this.......i know how you feel, you can PM me anytime you need someone to talk to....i liked the poem

Re: Another Time (User Rating: 1 )
by corrupted_minds on Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 04:23:38 AM AEST
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Another good write welldone

love always
corrupted minds

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