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Array ( [sid] => 54924 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Bleeding to Live [time] => 2004-07-05 22:31:08 [hometext] => Bleeding to live to die within [bodytext] => Bleeding to Live

For the blade you bleed
Seeking a solution
Deep down within
The tears you weep
Get you get closer
To your death
Bleeding for a solution
That isn't there

You seek to end
What's been given
You seek what's not there
For someone to understand
They aren't there
The blade is of no use
To solve what's within

You're losing it all
Before your eyes
Never standing up
There' s no one else
To live your life
Your fading away
Into nonexistence
Never to live again

Bleeding to live
To die within

You lost yourself
To the blade
To never live
You never stood up
And deserve
Nothing else
But what you get
It's the life you live [comments] => 4 [counter] => 187 [topic] => 13 [informant] => essentially9 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Bleeding to Live

Contributed by essentially9 on Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 10:31:08 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Bleeding to Live

For the blade you bleed
Seeking a solution
Deep down within
The tears you weep
Get you get closer
To your death
Bleeding for a solution
That isn't there

You seek to end
What's been given
You seek what's not there
For someone to understand
They aren't there
The blade is of no use
To solve what's within

You're losing it all
Before your eyes
Never standing up
There' s no one else
To live your life
Your fading away
Into nonexistence
Never to live again

Bleeding to live
To die within

You lost yourself
To the blade
To never live
You never stood up
And deserve
Nothing else
But what you get
It's the life you live

Copyright © essentially9 ... [ 2004-07-05 22:31:08]
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Re: Bleeding to Live (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhei76 on Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 10:48:59 PM AEST
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Pretty strong words. Good write. peace.

Re: Bleeding to Live (User Rating: 1 )
by InnerBeautyQueen on Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 10:52:03 PM AEST
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good job

Re: Bleeding to Live (User Rating: 1 )
by ginsdance on Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 11:09:33 PM AEST
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true poem. so many lose themselves in solving the pain by externalizing it. they just seem to forget that the problem doesn't go away just because you bleed, it's only a temporary fix to a larger problem. Great write.

Ginsdance

Re: Bleeding to Live (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 04:09:33 PM AEST
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I liked this I can relate to this a lot. I liked the bleeding for a solution that isn't there. Kind of direct and harsh but sometimes true.

Bobo (Joel)

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