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Array ( [sid] => 54918 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dangerously in love [time] => 2004-07-05 22:03:39 [hometext] => Dangerously in love with killing myself....read it...comments welcomed [bodytext] => Dangerously in love,
With killing myself,
And NO I DON'T NEED HELP.
I hate the why things are,
Life's so lucky it made it by this far.
Dangerously in love with death,
I been cutting,
But that ***** ain't no help,
I'm ***** starting to lose my mind,
This being alive ***** is running out of time.
Dangerously in love
With killing myself,
And NO I DON'T NEED HELP.
I have a choice with life you see,
Live life....
Or burn for all eternity,
The choice is quite easy for me.
Dangerously in love
With killing myself,
And NO I DON'T NEED HELP.
I just want to die,
So badly i sometimes i start to cry.
Life is such a tragedy
I'm dangerously in love with killing me,
Why can't anyone
HELP ME
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 148 [topic] => 36 [informant] => discantbelife [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Dangerously in love

Contributed by discantbelife on Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 10:03:39 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Dangerously in love,
With killing myself,
And NO I DON'T NEED HELP.
I hate the why things are,
Life's so lucky it made it by this far.
Dangerously in love with death,
I been cutting,
But that ***** ain't no help,
I'm ***** starting to lose my mind,
This being alive ***** is running out of time.
Dangerously in love
With killing myself,
And NO I DON'T NEED HELP.
I have a choice with life you see,
Live life....
Or burn for all eternity,
The choice is quite easy for me.
Dangerously in love
With killing myself,
And NO I DON'T NEED HELP.
I just want to die,
So badly i sometimes i start to cry.
Life is such a tragedy
I'm dangerously in love with killing me,
Why can't anyone
HELP ME

Copyright © discantbelife ... [ 2004-07-05 22:03:39]
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Re: Dangerously in love (User Rating: 1 )
by WorthlesSanity666 on Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 10:23:33 PM AEST
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No one can help you because, well, maybe you don't want help. I do it too, the whole love hate thing. The depression is a part of me, and I'm afraid to let it go. Just do it at your own pace. You poem was really emotional. Just try to take it one day at a time. I used to think the same things everyday. But maybe, if you really don't want to commit suicide deep down, and just want all the insufferable heavy feelings to go away, maybe you should look into medication. And I dunno, I always hear people say "Oh you'll get over it in time!" I dunno, it might work for you, it didn't work for me, but I didn't wait very long... I'm just rambling here, and i'm really annoying myself cuz I think I'm comminbg off as a b****. So, in short, don't do it. Just get through one day. Don't think about what's ahead, or in the past, just think about right now. If it helps you, I've attempted suicide three times, so i know how you feel. But I got through it, and so can you. I cut a couple times every night, and my last cut was about 3 weeks ago. You can do it. Just hang in there a little more. I hope I halped. pm me if you wanna talk or want to yell at me or wuteva. I'm here.

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