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[aid] => mick
[title] => ''THE'' NOTE
[time] => 2004-07-05 21:40:26
[hometext] => too depressing for words. Never get really depressed over one person, there are more there than you kno!!!!!
[bodytext] => I've lost you forever. You may say I haven't, but I know I have. Over one made me happy, now a new one to take that place. You say you don't want anything to do with him, but I know he will say something and make you want to go back to that. I know cause that is how it has been for the past 4 weeks. So don't say it won't. I understand about what is in your head, or what you have told me. But why does that have to happen now? I was happy then you told me that. Do you want to kno how I know things will change for us? Cause I have nowhere else to go but into your arms. But now I'm finished! I'm dead to the world. I'm dead to friends, family, LIFE. All I have is you left, but you won't have that. Goodnight and Goodbye forever.
Richard J. Gunter
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''THE'' NOTE
Contributed by
skelington
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Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 09:40:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I've lost you forever. You may say I haven't, but I know I have. Over one made me happy, now a new one to take that place. You say you don't want anything to do with him, but I know he will say something and make you want to go back to that. I know cause that is how it has been for the past 4 weeks. So don't say it won't. I understand about what is in your head, or what you have told me. But why does that have to happen now? I was happy then you told me that. Do you want to kno how I know things will change for us? Cause I have nowhere else to go but into your arms. But now I'm finished! I'm dead to the world. I'm dead to friends, family, LIFE. All I have is you left, but you won't have that. Goodnight and Goodbye forever.
Richard J. Gunter
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skelington
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Re: ''THE'' NOTE
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by ginsdance on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 11:14:11 PM AEST
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Never hold on to one person so tight that they become your entire existence wrapped up in someone else's form. True love is when you have enough respect for yourself, and enough respect for the other person that you can let go, even when it hurts so bad that you start to believe that your heart really can bleed from an emotional wound. Never forget that as long as you can pick up a pen and write that the world can and will hear your cries and they will sympathize, and when you scream, everyone hear looks up and tries to decipher what exactly is wrong. Great write, and remember, it's always darkest before the dawn.
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Re: ''THE'' NOTE
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by tifrob on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 11:46:21 PM AEST
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Everything Ginsdance wrote is exactly right. You want love ~ Not pity. Hold strong and walk on. Life happens ~ Go with it ~ Happier days will find you. Good luck and keep writing.
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Re: ''THE'' NOTE
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by srugglingyoungster on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 07:16:35 AM AEST
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Ginsdance,
thank you, you said that so well and you said it all! Stay strong and hold your head high, but im here as a friend if u need me at anytime. All you have to do is pm me or send me an email. |
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