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Array ( [sid] => 54877 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A girl I Know [time] => 2004-07-05 16:47:28 [hometext] => This Poem I wrote about myself cause I was used by a guy named Alex and now I have a wonderful new boyfriend who treats me good and I am trying to forget about the past please vote and comment thanks [bodytext] => there's a girl I Know
she won't show

people the real her
it's all a blurr

she wants to be so high
up into the sky

to go to the heaven blue
to be with you

she was used by a boy
who played her as a toy

she feels like *****
but this should be it

she should move away
from the past because it's a brand new day

life is finally going her way
and she listens to what people have to say

she steps up and becomes strong
knowing that boy was the one who was wrong

everything doesn't seem the same
because now no one is playing a game

she found a new boy
who doesn't treat her like a toy

he gives her so much love
she says he's her angel from above

he treats her so kind
and she can tell him what's on her mind

she tells him about the past
and he says that they will last

forever they will be
this girl can finally see

the real her
nothing is now a blurr

she's finally happy
and not so crappy

This girl is me
can't you see [comments] => 0 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 21 [informant] => adamsbabygurlie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
A girl I Know

Contributed by adamsbabygurlie on Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 04:47:28 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



there's a girl I Know
she won't show

people the real her
it's all a blurr

she wants to be so high
up into the sky

to go to the heaven blue
to be with you

she was used by a boy
who played her as a toy

she feels like *****
but this should be it

she should move away
from the past because it's a brand new day

life is finally going her way
and she listens to what people have to say

she steps up and becomes strong
knowing that boy was the one who was wrong

everything doesn't seem the same
because now no one is playing a game

she found a new boy
who doesn't treat her like a toy

he gives her so much love
she says he's her angel from above

he treats her so kind
and she can tell him what's on her mind

she tells him about the past
and he says that they will last

forever they will be
this girl can finally see

the real her
nothing is now a blurr

she's finally happy
and not so crappy

This girl is me
can't you see




Copyright © adamsbabygurlie ... [ 2004-07-05 16:47:28]
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