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Array ( [sid] => 54872 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A bird (falcon) with holy loves [time] => 2004-07-05 16:11:48 [hometext] => We are up on the winds [bodytext] => A bird ( falcon ) with holly loves

Do not weep with your fail


Let me fly up with fate


Of the loves that are far


We are breeds of the fair



You have stabs by my paws


AS a bird it never crawl


It is lives to be calm


Let all dogs are not called



May I sit on some plants


There roars and some pains


While one jump when we passed


Let me fly with my plays


I have white in your red


Because you are my preys


It is rally for peak


They are rocs that you pet



We have gases with our prizes


On the sky few are piled


We can strike on one pill


They have bloods that are spill



We are whales to other pall


We are threads to the palms


I have keys for your paces


Near to hell other have pales


Many are birds down on pins


I have grace to give spikes


I have gains on few spins


I have plunges in one span



On the sky my I am fit


It is all we are first


On one strike they lost lives


Not more cats I can find



I have gifts for my fates


Let me chase on your things


There are bows there are races


When there rains we are late


Let us filch as in field


I am sharp and with fiefs


With not laws I don’t faint


I have logics won’t for falls



We do bleed with our bloods


We have classes others are low


We have fleshes down on roads


As we fly the bows loaded



We have wings that are wide


We are free and are wise


We are up on the winds


We have graces even are wild
------end of verse –by cheung shun sang=cauchy3=laplace181-----------------



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A bird (falcon) with holy loves

Contributed by cauchy3 on Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 04:11:48 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



A bird ( falcon ) with holly loves

Do not weep with your fail


Let me fly up with fate


Of the loves that are far


We are breeds of the fair



You have stabs by my paws


AS a bird it never crawl


It is lives to be calm


Let all dogs are not called



May I sit on some plants


There roars and some pains


While one jump when we passed


Let me fly with my plays


I have white in your red


Because you are my preys


It is rally for peak


They are rocs that you pet



We have gases with our prizes


On the sky few are piled


We can strike on one pill


They have bloods that are spill



We are whales to other pall


We are threads to the palms


I have keys for your paces


Near to hell other have pales


Many are birds down on pins


I have grace to give spikes


I have gains on few spins


I have plunges in one span



On the sky my I am fit


It is all we are first


On one strike they lost lives


Not more cats I can find



I have gifts for my fates


Let me chase on your things


There are bows there are races


When there rains we are late


Let us filch as in field


I am sharp and with fiefs


With not laws I don’t faint


I have logics won’t for falls



We do bleed with our bloods


We have classes others are low


We have fleshes down on roads


As we fly the bows loaded



We have wings that are wide


We are free and are wise


We are up on the winds


We have graces even are wild
------end of verse –by cheung shun sang=cauchy3=laplace181-----------------







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Re: A bird (falcon) with holy loves (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 04:21:20 PM AEST
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I soooo wish this had not been double spaced, it would have read so much better. But this had a great mystical feel to it which I liked alot!!! I wrote one about falcon's also, titled Falcon's Lure. They hold such mystery, great for us poets/poetess' to observe. Well done here,cauchy!
Angel always...godspeed...joni




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