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Array ( [sid] => 54855 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Never Able To Find Rest. [time] => 2004-07-05 13:57:23 [hometext] => It happens every time! weather it's some one else that stops me or myself... and every time i come back a face the vicious circle again! PLEASE COMMENT... [bodytext] => I stand alone in my bedroom.
I stare at the white ceiling, and the blue walls.
I close my eyes with a darkened feeling.
The darkness pushes me, it pulls.
It swirls through my soul.
Coats me in pain.
Until I loose all control.
And then back comes my stain.
Healing is so hard,
When you can never get away.
I feel so locked inside the dark,
So insecure, so trapped by black flames.

Nothing has to have happened,
For it to be there,
It just likes to tare!
Until my wrist is striped,
With crimson and white.
Until I loose all my despair!

Quickly, I open my eyes, suddenly, to find.
My walls are bloodied and broken.
And the whispers clutch, a death token.
But when I reach out and touch,
I find nothing much.
I find the words “no!” have been spoken.

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Never Able To Find Rest.

Contributed by deathdrop on Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 01:57:23 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

I stand alone in my bedroom.
I stare at the white ceiling, and the blue walls.
I close my eyes with a darkened feeling.
The darkness pushes me, it pulls.
It swirls through my soul.
Coats me in pain.
Until I loose all control.
And then back comes my stain.
Healing is so hard,
When you can never get away.
I feel so locked inside the dark,
So insecure, so trapped by black flames.

Nothing has to have happened,
For it to be there,
It just likes to tare!
Until my wrist is striped,
With crimson and white.
Until I loose all my despair!

Quickly, I open my eyes, suddenly, to find.
My walls are bloodied and broken.
And the whispers clutch, a death token.
But when I reach out and touch,
I find nothing much.
I find the words “no!” have been spoken.

Copyright Â© deathdrop ... [ 2004-07-05 13:57:23]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Never Able To Find Rest. (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 02:00:52 PM AEST
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this is very sad..... i am sorry you feel like this, thanks for sharing this with us all....

pixie xx

Re: Never Able To Find Rest. (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 02:05:28 PM AEST
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Awwwww, hun
*hugs you lots*
Only you can break out of that circle and you ARE strong enough.
Im always here if you need me, ok?
I love the poem by the way.
*hugs* Phil xxx

Re: Never Able To Find Rest. (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 04:42:47 PM AEST
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I can relate to this very well..
Go to {another_dimension}s account and
read 'the demon on the wall' for me
tell me what you think =}

Ever need to talk, PM me,
i'll give you my email if you like..
Id like to help..

BS x

Re: Never Able To Find Rest. (User Rating: 1 )
by BabyFacedAngel2010 on Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 07:51:32 PM AEST
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Its A great write read my "I'm close to the edge" and anyothers if you'd like ...
BabyFacedAngel2010

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