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Array ( [sid] => 5485 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Weaver of Dreams [time] => 2002-10-23 13:30:00 [hometext] => Written for all the lovers out there! Although there are parts written specifically about my feelings for my boyfriend, I sort of tried to write this not as myself, but just from the point of view of one random lover to another. I think I accomplished this the best with the second stanza. [bodytext] => You love me even though I'm broken
Though my heart has been ripped open
I'm a fragile thing
With fairy wings
Everybody wants to be the butterfly
That's why I'd rather be the dragonfly

I'll weave your dreams in a thousand colours
Don't be someone who snuffs out lovers
Let the passion burn
And then you'll learn
That sometimes lust comes hand in hand with love
Don't you want both to be what it's made of?

My love's been shaken and still I stand strong
Who's to say what is and isn't wrong?
You can say so much
With just a touch
It's so much harder to love you when it hurts
Then I look in your eyes and I know for sure

When I'm with you, I love to be me
Coz nobody else gets to feel
The symphonic rush
Of our love's hush
But words take away from the exquisiteness
Of love so sweet, so I'll leave it at this [comments] => 4 [counter] => 214 [topic] => 2 [informant] => MoonlitAngel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Weaver of Dreams

Contributed by MoonlitAngel on Wednesday, 23rd October 2002 @ 01:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



You love me even though I'm broken
Though my heart has been ripped open
I'm a fragile thing
With fairy wings
Everybody wants to be the butterfly
That's why I'd rather be the dragonfly

I'll weave your dreams in a thousand colours
Don't be someone who snuffs out lovers
Let the passion burn
And then you'll learn
That sometimes lust comes hand in hand with love
Don't you want both to be what it's made of?

My love's been shaken and still I stand strong
Who's to say what is and isn't wrong?
You can say so much
With just a touch
It's so much harder to love you when it hurts
Then I look in your eyes and I know for sure

When I'm with you, I love to be me
Coz nobody else gets to feel
The symphonic rush
Of our love's hush
But words take away from the exquisiteness
Of love so sweet, so I'll leave it at this




Copyright © MoonlitAngel ... [ 2002-10-23 13:30:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Weaver of Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by ginsdance on Wednesday, 23rd October 2002 @ 01:51:41 PM AEST
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A dragon fly... I like that idea!!! And I also agree with the "Who's to say what is and isn't wrong?" line...

I LOVED this.. your poems are always fantastic!

Ginnie


Re: Weaver of Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Wednesday, 23rd October 2002 @ 02:45:23 PM AEST
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Good write, Moonlit....as usual..
Jenni


Re: Weaver of Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Emmie74 on Wednesday, 23rd October 2002 @ 04:33:03 PM AEST
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Great poem Dee. I can feel the emotions just jump off the screen. Yeah, I know everybody wants to be a butterfly, but I didn't have the choice!!!! You named me Butterfly anyway. :P Meh, oh well. I've got enough nick-names. Love ya always.

~ Em


Re: Weaver of Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by princesspurty on Tuesday, 12th November 2002 @ 09:24:59 AM AEST
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beautiful poem, I loved it!!!!!!!!!!




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