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Array ( [sid] => 54840 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Brother I Never Had [time] => 2004-07-05 11:30:50 [hometext] => My brother was still born, so I never got a chance to meet him.... [bodytext] => You were took before you were born,
Out of this life you were torn,
Why did this happen to you,
This is something you can’t undo.

It must have happened for a reason,
That’s what I’ve started believing,
Even so it’s still not fair,
Why were the angels already there?

Waiting to take you far away,
& so you remain to this day,
Up there in heaven on your cloud,
Can you see me when you look down?

It would have been nice to know,
But it wasn’t meant to be, you had to go,
Still my remaining question is why?
Why my brother was chosen to die.

How can something so wrong, be right?
Death held onto you, & held on tight,
Why didn’t he let go of your hand,
Instead of leading you to the unseen land.

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The Brother I Never Had

Contributed by pixie on Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 11:30:50 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

You were took before you were born,
Out of this life you were torn,
Why did this happen to you,
This is something you can’t undo.

It must have happened for a reason,
That’s what I’ve started believing,
Even so it’s still not fair,
Why were the angels already there?

Waiting to take you far away,
& so you remain to this day,
Up there in heaven on your cloud,
Can you see me when you look down?

It would have been nice to know,
But it wasn’t meant to be, you had to go,
Still my remaining question is why?
Why my brother was chosen to die.

How can something so wrong, be right?
Death held onto you, & held on tight,
Why didn’t he let go of your hand,
Instead of leading you to the unseen land.

Copyright Â© pixie ... [ 2004-07-05 11:30:50]
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Re: The Brother I Never Had (User Rating: 1 )
by Hannah_Heaven on Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 11:36:02 AM AEST
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this is so sad
i remember my lil baby cousin died
and i cried
and this made me cry
im so sorry x
take care
luv han x

(gr8 poem)

Re: The Brother I Never Had (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 11:37:54 AM AEST
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As hard as it is for us to accept, there is a reason. Very deeply haunting write, Krissy.

Love,
Rita

Re: The Brother I Never Had (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 02:18:12 PM AEST
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Oh hun.
*hugs you lots*
A brother of mine was still born and sometimes i wonder what he would have been like had he lived.
Such a beautiful poem Pixie.
*hugs* Phil xxx

Re: The Brother I Never Had (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 02:42:42 PM AEST
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awww........

hugs n' love nessa

@->>->:-

Re: The Brother I Never Had (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 03:49:09 PM AEST
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OMG!! Pixie.....I know how this feels only too well.... We just lost our little Chad..and I know his brother Che is feeling it terribly..... I will e-mail you... *tears*
(((((((((((((((((((((((PIXIE))))))))))))))))))))
Luv
Jenni

Re: The Brother I Never Had (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 04:55:34 PM AEST
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I have written two poems on this subject since I have had two angels myself. My prayers go out to you.
Angel always...joni

Re: The Brother I Never Had (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 04:53:21 AM AEST
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Awww..it was a sad thing..I can understand your feelings krissy..venkat

Re: The Brother I Never Had (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 01:23:25 PM AEST
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HEY GIRL. WHAT'S UP? NOTHING MUCH HERE. I JUST WANTED TO SAY HELLO AND HOW'S LIFE TREATING YOU? MINE'S PRETTY GOOD. I LIKE YOUR POEM. SEE YEA

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