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Array ( [sid] => 54810 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Broken Request [time] => 2004-07-05 00:23:09 [hometext] => I love you Nathan..... Everything I have done, I would never have done without you and I wish in a way we could go back.... But I want another try [bodytext] => In all the sunshine
In all the rain
There's nothing I can do
To heal your pain

In my sorrows
In my dreams
I see your face
I say lots of things

I say the things
I don't even realize I sometimes think
When I start to see what you say
It's all gone like a blink

Of all the things I've ever done
Of all the feelings I've never won
I never thought I would need you
I always thought, the end was done

Today and tomorrow
Present and past
There was surely something I could have done
To make it all last

Not that I would change a thing
Not that I would go back
I feel like I'm finding
The things I lack

My tears and my sorrow
My laughter and joy
I will never forgive myself
For playing with you like a toy

In all my life
Until my death
If I never know another
I'll still have been blessed

Can't still say I don't want you
Won't still say I don't need you
But there is someone else to love you
Like I could never do

I hope you see that I'm sorry
I hope you see that I cry
If you don't still love me
I'll be okay, I won't lie

I like to hear her talk about you
Because I know you're happy
I hope to hell
This doesn't come across as sappy

My words have been parched
My pen and paper laid aside
But it seems to me
Suddenly my soul is alight

Don't take this as me begging
I don't want one more try
If is something you don't want
Or if you think I would lie

I know you don't trust me
I will understand if you never do
But know this, if you want me
Then I'll be here for you

I love you like I never did
I hope to never loose you
But how to tell you what i feel
I haven't got a clue [comments] => 2 [counter] => 186 [topic] => 55 [informant] => Angelchild [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )
My Broken Request

Contributed by Angelchild on Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 12:23:09 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



In all the sunshine
In all the rain
There's nothing I can do
To heal your pain

In my sorrows
In my dreams
I see your face
I say lots of things

I say the things
I don't even realize I sometimes think
When I start to see what you say
It's all gone like a blink

Of all the things I've ever done
Of all the feelings I've never won
I never thought I would need you
I always thought, the end was done

Today and tomorrow
Present and past
There was surely something I could have done
To make it all last

Not that I would change a thing
Not that I would go back
I feel like I'm finding
The things I lack

My tears and my sorrow
My laughter and joy
I will never forgive myself
For playing with you like a toy

In all my life
Until my death
If I never know another
I'll still have been blessed

Can't still say I don't want you
Won't still say I don't need you
But there is someone else to love you
Like I could never do

I hope you see that I'm sorry
I hope you see that I cry
If you don't still love me
I'll be okay, I won't lie

I like to hear her talk about you
Because I know you're happy
I hope to hell
This doesn't come across as sappy

My words have been parched
My pen and paper laid aside
But it seems to me
Suddenly my soul is alight

Don't take this as me begging
I don't want one more try
If is something you don't want
Or if you think I would lie

I know you don't trust me
I will understand if you never do
But know this, if you want me
Then I'll be here for you

I love you like I never did
I hope to never loose you
But how to tell you what i feel
I haven't got a clue




Copyright © Angelchild ... [ 2004-07-05 00:23:09]
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Re: My Broken Request (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 01:04:19 AM AEST
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A love that has suddenly found selflessness. Beautiful piece. I think if you can find happiness loving him, even without possessing, it will do your heart a world of good.
Take care now
Andrew


Re: My Broken Request (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Saturday, 10th June 2006 @ 06:41:47 PM AEST
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Can't still say I don't want you
Won't still say I don't need you
But there is someone else to love you
Like I could never do



I enjoyed the message in this piece...you spoke very open and honestly, and it's quite refreshing. Keep it up, and all the best to you.


Scorp.




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