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Cuz the time keeps running and the game can’t play
We all gotta realize its alright to take a step outta the situation
Cuz the more force you use will only make more complications
All of use have to learn to touch and not just to feel
Cuz life isn’t a dream so some things aren’t real
Gotta always finish through and not end where you start
And at the edge of your mind is where emotions do apart
I wanna live in a place where life’s not according to plan
And where everyone with a mind is equal to the white man
In this life we live our thoughts may have to rearrange
But when the time comes our lives will adapt to change
Give up all the money and love and get rid of the hate
Because within this small world we all have too much to relate [comments] => 2 [counter] => 185 [topic] => 43 [informant] => coaster [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

False Security

Contributed by coaster on Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 12:15:10 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

No one can trust one another now a days
Cuz the time keeps running and the game can’t play
We all gotta realize its alright to take a step outta the situation
Cuz the more force you use will only make more complications
All of use have to learn to touch and not just to feel
Cuz life isn’t a dream so some things aren’t real
Gotta always finish through and not end where you start
And at the edge of your mind is where emotions do apart
I wanna live in a place where life’s not according to plan
And where everyone with a mind is equal to the white man
In this life we live our thoughts may have to rearrange
But when the time comes our lives will adapt to change
Give up all the money and love and get rid of the hate
Because within this small world we all have too much to relate

Copyright © coaster ... [ 2004-07-05 00:15:10]
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Re: False Security (User Rating: 1 )
by dreaded_Axe_of_gore on Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 12:14:34 PM AEST
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Why do people always write Cuz? How long does it take to write because? But nonetheless a pretty good poem.

Re: False Security (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 05:20:28 PM AEST
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great write and message.

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