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Array ( [sid] => 54798 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Taste my steel [time] => 2004-07-04 23:36:09 [hometext] => Heres a Poem I just wrote about the sweet taste of vengeance [bodytext] => I crave your blood and sweat

On the tip of my sword

As I caress your face you beg for mercy and forgiveness

This only fuels me for the fatal blow

Ill make sure you suffer

In lives beyond

This is what happens to those who mess with me

You have brought this upon your self

They wont ever trace it back to me

I sit back and laugh because its my turn to use you

Your last words are meaningless

I have turned everyone against you

They applaud my actions

I have been waiting for this moment for such a long time

And now that its finally here im going to enjoy every bit of it

Binded by me

Blinded by me

So mote it be!
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Taste my steel

Contributed by dreaded_Axe_of_gore on Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 11:36:09 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I crave your blood and sweat

On the tip of my sword

As I caress your face you beg for mercy and forgiveness

This only fuels me for the fatal blow

Ill make sure you suffer

In lives beyond

This is what happens to those who mess with me

You have brought this upon your self

They wont ever trace it back to me

I sit back and laugh because its my turn to use you

Your last words are meaningless

I have turned everyone against you

They applaud my actions

I have been waiting for this moment for such a long time

And now that its finally here im going to enjoy every bit of it

Binded by me

Blinded by me

So mote it be!

Copyright © dreaded_Axe_of_gore ... [ 2004-07-04 23:36:09]
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Re: Taste my steel (User Rating: 1 )
by evilfairy on Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 11:40:44 PM AEST
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Scary but fascinating!!

Re: Taste my steel (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 11:55:02 PM AEST
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this is great, one side note, next time don't just use sword, to vage, use the name a spacifit type of sword, it sownds more poetic and is much more vivid.

Re: Taste my steel (User Rating: 1 )
by katyqueen35 on Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 12:36:15 AM AEST
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execellent poem.
creepy.i like it.

Re: Taste my steel (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 04:46:40 AM AEST
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wow, great poem,

pixie xx

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