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Array ( [sid] => 54774 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Heartships [time] => 2004-07-04 20:37:55 [hometext] => this song is about my ex-girlfriend who, after a year of being in love, broke up with me and i wrote this a few weeks before she graduated and i'd never see her again [bodytext] => All the pain that I’ve been through
All the crying that I do
The countless times I’ve felt the burn
Would’ve all been worth it if you’d returned

Other girls just can’t replace
Your precious kiss, your lovely face
But I try to hide my pain from you
Afraid that you might learn the truth

But inside, I know its real
This love for you I still can feel
I still love you with all my heart
Too late now, too far apart

I miss you still, so very much
Longing for one simple touch
How I lost you, I don’t know
It was so hard for me to let you go

If I had just one more chance,
I’d hold you close, request one dance,
I’d keep you warm all through the night
Promise you’d always be treated right

But somehow I lost it all
Even now my tears still fall
Baby I just wish you knew
How much I’m still in love with you

But there’s nothing I can do
I feel so trapped, without you
My wings are clipped, I cannot fly
My river of hope is running dry

You’ll be gone forever in only weeks
Already tears flow down my cheeks
When you’re gone I know I’ll miss
Your perfect smile, your perfect kiss

I miss you baby, please don’t go
But if you do, please just know
Even though we’re far apart
I still love you with all my heart [comments] => 4 [counter] => 176 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Steven [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Heartships

Contributed by Steven on Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 08:37:55 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



All the pain that I’ve been through
All the crying that I do
The countless times I’ve felt the burn
Would’ve all been worth it if you’d returned

Other girls just can’t replace
Your precious kiss, your lovely face
But I try to hide my pain from you
Afraid that you might learn the truth

But inside, I know its real
This love for you I still can feel
I still love you with all my heart
Too late now, too far apart

I miss you still, so very much
Longing for one simple touch
How I lost you, I don’t know
It was so hard for me to let you go

If I had just one more chance,
I’d hold you close, request one dance,
I’d keep you warm all through the night
Promise you’d always be treated right

But somehow I lost it all
Even now my tears still fall
Baby I just wish you knew
How much I’m still in love with you

But there’s nothing I can do
I feel so trapped, without you
My wings are clipped, I cannot fly
My river of hope is running dry

You’ll be gone forever in only weeks
Already tears flow down my cheeks
When you’re gone I know I’ll miss
Your perfect smile, your perfect kiss

I miss you baby, please don’t go
But if you do, please just know
Even though we’re far apart
I still love you with all my heart




Copyright © Steven ... [ 2004-07-04 20:37:55]
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Re: Heartships (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 08:47:21 PM AEST
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so beautifully sad, warm welcome to ypdc too:) hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Heartships (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 09:02:11 PM AEST
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Oh, Steven - This is beautiful!!!! Wonderfully, wonderfully written... so quietly sincere and heartbreakingly honest. This piece really touched me - I can completely relate... my recent submissions are very similar. *sigh*

Welcome to YPDC! Please keep posting here... I am already impressed and looking forward to reading more of your work!

Well done!
SNM


Re: Heartships (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 10:27:13 PM AEST
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This is so tender and soooooo sad .I had a lump in my throat.

This piece really moved me..Brilliant!

LW


Re: Heartships (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 11:00:07 PM AEST
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Hey there Steven, welcome to the best site ever. Keep posting.

An emotional piece with such a touching ending.




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