Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	29-May 16:05:13 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 54663 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Holy War (Pt.3) [time] => 2004-07-03 17:49:32 [hometext] => FINALLY FINISHED!!! WHOO! Check under my profile for other two. [bodytext] => (Curiously):Have I been Revealed the Light?

Noises so loud,
Up in the clouds,
What's wrong with the Angels?
Evil is stabbing backs,
And Micheal's fighting back,
Explain to me, Angels!
Why did we
get the Choice?
GOD! Can't you hear
My feeble voice?
------------------------------------
[Chorus]:
My Revelation,
I must scribe!
Let the universe know,
How many Angels died!
------------------------------------
What did this war do!
All the unholy never knew!
Seeing defeat at the end,
Seperated many friends!
And now that some,
Know the war's been WON!
------------------------------------
{Chorus}
------------------------------------
Shall I speak right now,
And shall I tell how,
Angels against Angels,
So many dead Angels. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 208 [topic] => 34 [informant] => DerPinguin44 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 21 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )

Holy War (Pt.3)

Contributed by DerPinguin44 on Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 05:49:32 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

(Curiously):Have I been Revealed the Light?

Noises so loud,
Up in the clouds,
What's wrong with the Angels?
Evil is stabbing backs,
And Micheal's fighting back,
Explain to me, Angels!
Why did we
get the Choice?
GOD! Can't you hear
My feeble voice?
------------------------------------
[Chorus]:
My Revelation,
I must scribe!
Let the universe know,
How many Angels died!
------------------------------------
What did this war do!
All the unholy never knew!
Seeing defeat at the end,
Seperated many friends!
And now that some,
Know the war's been WON!
------------------------------------
{Chorus}
------------------------------------
Shall I speak right now,
And shall I tell how,
Angels against Angels,
So many dead Angels.

Copyright © DerPinguin44 ... [ 2004-07-03 17:49:32]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Holy War (Pt.3) (User Rating: 1 )
by UncleSpunky on Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 06:17:03 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

If only we could hear u sing it too! Have you written the melody?

Re: Holy War (Pt.3) (User Rating: 1 )
by DerPinguin44 on Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 06:32:18 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Sorry to say this, I'm not singing it.
I'm lead guitarist.
*coughs*But, if you do want me to sing it....
laa?!
AHEM.

Re: Holy War (Pt.3) (User Rating: 1 )
by Ethereal_Engine on Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 10:09:32 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

The composition of this is different from the first two. No repeats of verses. I like that its a good way to conclude things by making it different and fresh. It seems a lot sharper and would probally sound louder then the first two parts. Aww man your not gonna sing it lol. Im no singer either, but I did it twice...not so much singing but reading the lyrics with no melody and adding FX to em. They turned out ok. The songs were called "From the mouths of men to gods come forth" and "Samael the Twelve Winged Terror" both of em are posted on my Acid Planet page. Yeah both are about religion...half based on things I learned in Western Civ I...some based on the game Silent Hill...some based on research...some I made up.

Re: Holy War (Pt.3) (User Rating: 1 )
by DerPinguin44 on Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 07:37:05 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

I thank you for your comments. I am currently working on my vocals, you might be able to hear me do them.
-The Pinguin

Re: Holy War (Pt.3) (User Rating: 1 )
by mdmorash on Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 02:47:15 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Well...that was brilliant.

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com