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Array ( [sid] => 54642 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Am [time] => 2004-07-03 15:09:29 [hometext] => i think some people can relate.... [bodytext] => I am a polite girl
Please and thank you’s echo through
Smoothing the ears of the elderly

I am a WILd girl
Rattle snake moves caress the song
My body gets lost in

I am a Clean girl
No poison shoots up my veins
No cigars decorate my mouth

I am a s-m-a-r-t girl
Higher classes dance through my schedule
Reading and writing, at times,
Come as second nature

I am a Strong girl
To hold in the tears that wish
To cascade down my cheeks
To help others carry on

I am a weak girl
Bad news waves through me
And I get confused and saddened
Craving to get away
Carving my skin with agony

I am a Shy girl
Closing in my own world
Creating my own box,
My own dimension

I am a friendly girl
I converse in delight with people
Playing the song of laughter
And interest

I am a funny girl
Joking around makes things fun
Breaks the ice
And build my character

I am a serious girl
When time is called to be
No smiling, no laughing
Serious business is all in sight

My personality is scattered
Puzzle pieces
That beautify my flesh

Piece them, one by one.

Make me whole.

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I Am

Contributed by xxbreathlessx on Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 03:09:29 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

I am a polite girl
Please and thank you’s echo through
Smoothing the ears of the elderly

I am a WILd girl
Rattle snake moves caress the song
My body gets lost in

I am a Clean girl
No poison shoots up my veins
No cigars decorate my mouth

I am a s-m-a-r-t girl
Higher classes dance through my schedule
Reading and writing, at times,
Come as second nature

I am a Strong girl
To hold in the tears that wish
To cascade down my cheeks
To help others carry on

I am a weak girl
Bad news waves through me
And I get confused and saddened
Craving to get away
Carving my skin with agony

I am a Shy girl
Closing in my own world
Creating my own box,
My own dimension

I am a friendly girl
I converse in delight with people
Playing the song of laughter
And interest

I am a funny girl
Joking around makes things fun
Breaks the ice
And build my character

I am a serious girl
When time is called to be
No smiling, no laughing
Serious business is all in sight

My personality is scattered
Puzzle pieces
That beautify my flesh

Piece them, one by one.

Make me whole.

Copyright © xxbreathlessx ... [ 2004-07-03 15:09:29]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I Am (User Rating: 1 )
by Hannah_Heaven on Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 03:45:51 PM AEST
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its really lovely
i really can relate to it(which its ment to be able to do)all these different emotions put together equal a language of personality and youve expressed it crystal clear
luv han x

Re: I Am (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 04:00:13 PM AEST
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all these things we never knew about you!

PFR

Re: I Am (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 06:45:54 AM AEST
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I can relate........ this is a great poem,

pixie xx

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