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Cast out from heaven,
Sowing hatred and discord,
The Dark Angel paused
Amid the creatures of the Lord
- err descending into Hell.

With thund'rous voice the angel spoke,
His eyes were piercing black,
About him fire and brimstone roiled,
and Daemons capered at his back.

"Is there one tormented?
Is there a heart bereft?
Is there a spirit so demented,
'twould put his soul at risk?"

Of the creatures gathered there,
Only one answered the call,
He, the most favoured of God,
With free-will, his the farthest fall.

With malignant glee, Satan smiled,
Upon the face of Man,
At one so easily beguiled,
Yet so material to his plan.

"For those who will embrace the Dark,
I pledge that each foul act,
And every cruel deed you do,
Puts a seal upon our pact."

"And when your line
Has run its course,
And you're beyond the pale
With no remorse,

Then in my realm you will abide,
Along with Jeff and Jack,
(For those two special boys, you see,
- Cerberus brings their slippers,)
Near lads like these you shall reside
The Dahmer and the Ripper."

- Stoney

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Two Special Boys

Contributed by Stoney1 on Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 11:31:54 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Cast out from heaven,
Sowing hatred and discord,
The Dark Angel paused
Amid the creatures of the Lord
- err descending into Hell.

With thund'rous voice the angel spoke,
His eyes were piercing black,
About him fire and brimstone roiled,
and Daemons capered at his back.

"Is there one tormented?
Is there a heart bereft?
Is there a spirit so demented,
'twould put his soul at risk?"

Of the creatures gathered there,
Only one answered the call,
He, the most favoured of God,
With free-will, his the farthest fall.

With malignant glee, Satan smiled,
Upon the face of Man,
At one so easily beguiled,
Yet so material to his plan.

"For those who will embrace the Dark,
I pledge that each foul act,
And every cruel deed you do,
Puts a seal upon our pact."

"And when your line
Has run its course,
And you're beyond the pale
With no remorse,

Then in my realm you will abide,
Along with Jeff and Jack,
(For those two special boys, you see,
- Cerberus brings their slippers,)
Near lads like these you shall reside
The Dahmer and the Ripper."

- Stoney

Copyright © Stoney1 ... [ 2004-07-03 11:31:54]
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Re: Two Special Boys (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 10:42:02 AM AEST
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haha "Cerberus brings their slippers"
love that line. this was full of imagery for me. VIVID

PFR

Re: Two Special Boys (User Rating: 1 )
by purpleveil on Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 11:45:57 PM AEST
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I thought your poem was exceptional. nice twist at the end, too!

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