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Array ( [sid] => 54590 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Fake Play Of Love [time] => 2004-07-02 22:48:01 [hometext] => The title isnt very much about what the poem is about,..., [bodytext] => Everyday is the same
I wake up to pain
I dont want to try
But I dont want to die

I just want to pain to end
I want these wounds to mend
I want to stop hurting all my friends

Like she does, I wear a mask
Like Im part of a cast
And living this lie that I play
That i say " Im ok" everyday

I hide my depression so no one will worrie
But nobodys there to care
I have to hide my sadness from you all
I'll never let you see I'm about to fall
I'll never let you hear my screams for help I call

So I have to say everything is ok
For them I live for everyday
To know that they are fine
Even if they give up trying, I wont

I wont let them fall
To be where I am
A place where only I should be damned. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 169 [topic] => 61 [informant] => willow_tara72002 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

The Fake Play Of Love

Contributed by willow_tara72002 on Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 10:48:01 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Everyday is the same
I wake up to pain
I dont want to try
But I dont want to die

I just want to pain to end
I want these wounds to mend
I want to stop hurting all my friends

Like she does, I wear a mask
Like Im part of a cast
And living this lie that I play
That i say " Im ok" everyday

I hide my depression so no one will worrie
But nobodys there to care
I have to hide my sadness from you all
I'll never let you see I'm about to fall
I'll never let you hear my screams for help I call

So I have to say everything is ok
For them I live for everyday
To know that they are fine
Even if they give up trying, I wont

I wont let them fall
To be where I am
A place where only I should be damned.

Copyright © willow_tara72002 ... [ 2004-07-02 22:48:01]
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Re: The Fake Play Of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by PieceOfABrokenSoul on Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 02:50:09 PM AEST
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Wow, I feel you on this one. You are one of few people I can relate to anymore. Your poem really touched me and I hope you keep writing more.

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