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Array ( [sid] => 54589 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Beginning of the End [time] => 2004-07-02 22:39:29 [hometext] => i haven't posted in at least a year! wow...umm..this is about what the world could be coming to...i guess..? please comment! i'd love to know what ya'll think! [bodytext] => Hearts are breaking
Hear the sound
Bones are shattering
Hit the ground

Lies are whispering
Puncture the skin
As we give in to the darkness
And wretchedness wins

Demons are clawing
Their way into minds
We just sit back and watch
‘Cause we’ve missed all the signs

That our world is crumbling
Into pieces of hate
And our people are dieing
But now it’s too late

‘Cause we’ve lost all our morals
And religion is stale
As our hearts fill with emptiness
And foolishness prevails

We’re lost in ourselves
With nothing to lose
But our hopes and our dreams
And reality too

We’re fading to black
Because this is the end
And there’s no looking back
But we forgot to begin

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Beginning of the End

Contributed by wild_heart_of_fire on Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 10:39:29 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Hearts are breaking
Hear the sound
Bones are shattering
Hit the ground

Lies are whispering
Puncture the skin
As we give in to the darkness
And wretchedness wins

Demons are clawing
Their way into minds
We just sit back and watch
‘Cause we’ve missed all the signs

That our world is crumbling
Into pieces of hate
And our people are dieing
But now it’s too late

‘Cause we’ve lost all our morals
And religion is stale
As our hearts fill with emptiness
And foolishness prevails

We’re lost in ourselves
With nothing to lose
But our hopes and our dreams
And reality too

We’re fading to black
Because this is the end
And there’s no looking back
But we forgot to begin

Copyright Â© wild_heart_of_fire ... [ 2004-07-02 22:39:29]
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Re: Beginning of the End (User Rating: 1 )
by Jacquelynne on Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 11:01:22 PM AEST
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wow... this sounds like something i'd write. it's really good, i look forward to reading more of your work.

hugs'n'kisses

jenni
aka
jac

Re: Beginning of the End (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 04:11:57 AM AEST
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Good expression.. nice poem...venkat

Re: Beginning of the End (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 11:31:24 AM AEST
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great expression , wonderful poem,

pixie xx

Re: Beginning of the End (User Rating: 1 )
by Kirby on Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 09:16:32 PM AEST
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such a powerful and great write. Yes we are fading to black. I hate how the world is going right now. Such a wonderful poem. Love::::Kirby

Re: Beginning of the End (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 10:22:48 PM AEST
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You are right about this as far as religion goes God always keeps a remnant around for those who are looking.

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