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[aid] => Mick
[title] => Amber
[time] => 2002-10-23 06:30:00
[hometext] => For Amber 'Rose',
Here is something of me trying to say how much you've awoken my brain and faith from a lengthy slumber!
Thankyou for being so nice and well, a true friend who's real.
[bodytext] => You talk to me as a real person should
You share your thoughts be they bad or good,
Now always awake throughout the whole week
So happily reading your tongue in your cheek,
In my prayers and dreams you somehow appear
Many miles far away but you feel so near,
You go by the name of Amber Rose
A more perfect description could not have been chose,
Inability to help does drive me quite mad
I'll keep on praying you won't feel so sad,
You will be Ok because your spirit is so strong
You will find the love you've been searching for long,
In heaven you've a place, as you love our God
Never being deterred if some think this quite odd,
It's so plain to see you're a lover not a hater
In your most eloquent descriptions of all mother nature,
You're a loveable lady Amber I think you are great
No man could want for a more suitable mate,
You're honest, individual and so pleasantly kind
What's more there's no BS you just speak your mind,
Wishing you could see this mental image I have
My dear friend Amber I know you would laugh,
Dewy's so very lucky to have you as his Mum
I almost feel jealous that you tickle his tum,
Uuuuuuhhhhmmm!!!!!!
Sorry about that my mind just went blank
To my Dearest Amber Rose for your friendship
My heart and soul send everlasting thanks.
With love
Dean Andrew Prime
10th October 2002
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[ratings] => 1
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Amber
Contributed by
Unaekseveer1
on
Wednesday, 23rd October 2002 @ 06:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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You talk to me as a real person should
You share your thoughts be they bad or good,
Now always awake throughout the whole week
So happily reading your tongue in your cheek,
In my prayers and dreams you somehow appear
Many miles far away but you feel so near,
You go by the name of Amber Rose
A more perfect description could not have been chose,
Inability to help does drive me quite mad
I'll keep on praying you won't feel so sad,
You will be Ok because your spirit is so strong
You will find the love you've been searching for long,
In heaven you've a place, as you love our God
Never being deterred if some think this quite odd,
It's so plain to see you're a lover not a hater
In your most eloquent descriptions of all mother nature,
You're a loveable lady Amber I think you are great
No man could want for a more suitable mate,
You're honest, individual and so pleasantly kind
What's more there's no BS you just speak your mind,
Wishing you could see this mental image I have
My dear friend Amber I know you would laugh,
Dewy's so very lucky to have you as his Mum
I almost feel jealous that you tickle his tum,
Uuuuuuhhhhmmm!!!!!!
Sorry about that my mind just went blank
To my Dearest Amber Rose for your friendship
My heart and soul send everlasting thanks.
With love
Dean Andrew Prime
10th October 2002
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Re: Amber
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by Rose on
Wednesday, 23rd October 2002 @ 11:04:36 AM AEST
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And a very well written write my dear. Im so honored indeed and thank you with all my heart. You are a dear person, with a heart of gold. Your mind has its own power, as you move ahead to keep it full of knowlege, and your heart is always filled with friendship and love. Thanks Dean,
Always with love,
Amber Rose @}-->->-- |
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Re: Amber
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Thursday, 24th October 2002 @ 11:55:25 AM AEST
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Thank you Amber,
I was sooo pleased to read that you liked this, and I see you used that rose thingy too! looks Ok do ya think? :-)
With love
Dean;-) |
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Re: Amber
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 24th October 2002 @ 02:00:00 PM AEST
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Lovely and very fitting tribute to a great gal, Dean... Amber is truly a special lady...one with whom I'm glad to be friends...
Jenni |
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Re: Amber
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Friday, 25th October 2002 @ 02:52:46 AM AEST
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Thankyou Jenni,
And yes I totally agree with you, she's smashing.
With love
Dean;-) |
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Re: Amber
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by ShadowsCloud on
Monday, 25th November 2002 @ 07:20:14 AM AEST
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Dean, this is a great poem. And a wonderful tribute to your friend. I have been trying to write a poem about my bestfriend in the world, but for some reason I just can't find the words that would best describe how I feel about having her as a friend. I met her after I moved to Ohio, and had started a new school almost 6 years ago. When I met her it felt like I didn't have a friend in the world. And for some reason I can't put the words together to describe how I feel.
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Re: Amber
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Monday, 25th November 2002 @ 09:23:33 PM AEST
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Thankyou Candice,
Amber is a very special lady, so it didn't take much to come up with a few words for her.
I'm just so very pleased that she liked it and so very luck to know her as a friend.
Candice it's not very good advice, but have you tried not trying to find the words for your feelings? I mean when I wrote this I found I didn't have to try, it just seemed to flow! But you do have to be in the right frame of mind to do this, and luckily for me Amber often puts me in this great mood!
Although I was still a little nervous about sending it to her, when I really shouldn't have been!
Thankyou again for kindly commenting so nicely on my write.
With love
Dean:-) |
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Re: Amber
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by ShadowsCloud on
Tuesday, 26th November 2002 @ 07:24:45 PM AEST
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Dean, Actually that is rather good advice. It I wasn't so intent on finding the right words I would have seen that for my self. I know right now what I really need to do is to put that particular poem off to the side for a couple of days. I bet when I come back to it I will know what to say and how to say it. I have had to do that once before, when there was a particular idea I was trying to get across. Thank you for your advise. I am glad that you have a friend like Amber to put you in a good mood. That is what my two best friends in the world do for me. A side from Shadow they are the best.
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