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Array ( [sid] => 54541 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Inside [time] => 2004-07-02 14:57:26 [hometext] => This song is about an old man who waits his lost love. But he finally realizes she will never come. So, he hangs himself. [bodytext] => Forgotten love
Sits and waits
Thinking of yesterday
He's looks for answers in the bottle
Broken and blind
He waits for his lost love
A woman he met in his youth
A woman that only he cared about
He tries to look past his epiphany
But nothing seems to help

The TV's on
No one's around
The radio's blasting
Not one sound
A rope hangs from the ceiling
Below the attic, no one sees
How broken this man has become
I fear that one day
His life will crack
And he will exist
No more... [comments] => 3 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Bones [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Inside

Contributed by Bones on Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 02:57:26 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Forgotten love
Sits and waits
Thinking of yesterday
He's looks for answers in the bottle
Broken and blind
He waits for his lost love
A woman he met in his youth
A woman that only he cared about
He tries to look past his epiphany
But nothing seems to help

The TV's on
No one's around
The radio's blasting
Not one sound
A rope hangs from the ceiling
Below the attic, no one sees
How broken this man has become
I fear that one day
His life will crack
And he will exist
No more...

Copyright © Bones ... [ 2004-07-02 14:57:26]
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Re: Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by waos on Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 03:42:21 PM AEST
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don't really know what to say about it, but i liked it. it's a sad story but the words go together pretty good.

Re: Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by lost_angeluk on Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 06:09:02 AM AEST
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nice story!!! but it is sad the way he waits for his lost love

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Re: Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 26th October 2006 @ 04:51:03 PM AEST
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this is such a sad poem. good, but very sad

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