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Array ( [sid] => 54502 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => out of Dazeys Pill Box [time] => 2004-07-02 10:29:23 [hometext] => A song I started writting at the show the other night [bodytext] => Wish I had someone to love
That feeling of above
Whence so low
The telling of alone

Wish I had someone to hold
Keep from feeling so cold
Cold & alone
So far from a home
So cold , cold & alone
Withering my soul, leaving only bone
Withering my soul, leaving me all alone
Withering

___


You're the act that takes my soul
Capturing me in the moment
I want to release control
Wanting to find every word you sent
So I can belive I know
Every jester & curveture your body bent

Everytime I see you smile
You trap part of me
I'm falling in love with your style
You're taking piece by peace

If I was a Holy man
I would be your preist
If I was your promise land
I would be the skies of the east
Where your sun could breath
From start to end
Giving me light all day
Where you can stand
And everything will be 'kay [comments] => 2 [counter] => 184 [topic] => 33 [informant] => rhei76 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 1 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SecretLove )
out of Dazeys Pill Box

Contributed by rhei76 on Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 10:29:23 AM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove



Wish I had someone to love
That feeling of above
Whence so low
The telling of alone

Wish I had someone to hold
Keep from feeling so cold
Cold & alone
So far from a home
So cold , cold & alone
Withering my soul, leaving only bone
Withering my soul, leaving me all alone
Withering

___


You're the act that takes my soul
Capturing me in the moment
I want to release control
Wanting to find every word you sent
So I can belive I know
Every jester & curveture your body bent

Everytime I see you smile
You trap part of me
I'm falling in love with your style
You're taking piece by peace

If I was a Holy man
I would be your preist
If I was your promise land
I would be the skies of the east
Where your sun could breath
From start to end
Giving me light all day
Where you can stand
And everything will be 'kay




Copyright © rhei76 ... [ 2004-07-02 10:29:23]
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Re: out of Dazeys Pill Box (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 11:38:27 AM AEST
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Great poem,

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Re: out of Dazeys Pill Box (User Rating: 1 )
by KiLin on Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 08:54:44 PM AEST
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I have never read a poem like this one before. I really liked it.




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