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Array ( [sid] => 54498 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Please... Forgive Me [time] => 2004-07-02 09:30:41 [hometext] => I felt I had to write this... even though this person will not understand... all the things I have written... b/c this person doesn't really know yet... [bodytext] => Please... forgive me...
And all that I am
For I know... what I have done...
I have done you wrong
But believe me... when I say...
These things that need to be said
And how sorry... I am

Please... forgive me...
And all that I am
I have shaken...
The very foundation...
On which our friendship stands
I have... shattered all the faith that you once had...
And all the trust in me...
I don't want to ever hurt you again

Please... forgive me...
And all that I am
Please... accept this sorrow
From deep down in my heart
'Cause I know in your eyes...
I have broken the trust that we had...
And not just stretched it... and bent it out of shape...
But have broken it... by being the untrustworthy person I am
It would seem that I have hurt you... my friend... again

Please... forgive me...
And all that I am
And see the inside of me...
The peace that has been broken
And the blackened heart I would give...
If I could take it all back... in a heartbeat and then...

Please... forgive me... my friend...
And all that I am...
For I am nothing more than just a person...
A human being...
Not perfect by any means...
A person it would seem... that...
Has taken away... a part of you...
And has left you shattered and broken
and so... so blue

Oh... how I love you...
You're all the world to me...
I need to hear your forgiveness...
I'm not a begging you... but...
Won't you... please.... forgive me...
My friend? [comments] => 3 [counter] => 260 [topic] => 50 [informant] => kidpoet_213 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => ApologyPoetry )
Please... Forgive Me

Contributed by kidpoet_213 on Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 09:30:41 AM in AEST
Topic: ApologyPoetry



Please... forgive me...
And all that I am
For I know... what I have done...
I have done you wrong
But believe me... when I say...
These things that need to be said
And how sorry... I am

Please... forgive me...
And all that I am
I have shaken...
The very foundation...
On which our friendship stands
I have... shattered all the faith that you once had...
And all the trust in me...
I don't want to ever hurt you again

Please... forgive me...
And all that I am
Please... accept this sorrow
From deep down in my heart
'Cause I know in your eyes...
I have broken the trust that we had...
And not just stretched it... and bent it out of shape...
But have broken it... by being the untrustworthy person I am
It would seem that I have hurt you... my friend... again

Please... forgive me...
And all that I am
And see the inside of me...
The peace that has been broken
And the blackened heart I would give...
If I could take it all back... in a heartbeat and then...

Please... forgive me... my friend...
And all that I am...
For I am nothing more than just a person...
A human being...
Not perfect by any means...
A person it would seem... that...
Has taken away... a part of you...
And has left you shattered and broken
and so... so blue

Oh... how I love you...
You're all the world to me...
I need to hear your forgiveness...
I'm not a begging you... but...
Won't you... please.... forgive me...
My friend?




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Re: Please... Forgive Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Egyptian_Smudge on Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 09:47:37 AM AEST
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It is a touching poem. You should really give it to the person it is meant for. Great job.
:)


Re: Please... Forgive Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Stoney1 on Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 12:39:03 PM AEST
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Your sincerity is evident. The remorse you feel does you credit.

But this strikes me as a first draft. I'd try a little editing with a view to tightening it up.

Stoney


Re: Please... Forgive Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 09:58:50 PM AEST
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Great write. There is a bunch of people I wish would forgive me for what I have done.




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