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[title] => Left Behind
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[bodytext] => Beyond the silence of a moonlit night,her prayers are carried to the stars
Within her heart,a mournful sound,the longing of dreams afar
Loneliness wraps around her,cloaks her faded withering soul
Held captive by the memories,bound in pain and its control
All around her lie the remnants of a life that she once shared
The spirit he set free, now dies broken in despair
Lifeless eyes without a light,drift across the wooden floor
As she relives the nights they danced to promises of more
By the window on a table,of redwood and fine lace
There stares at her a reminder,another time another place
Back when dreams were young and his love had been her breath
When all they needed was each other and all they knew was happiness
Now she breathes alone,yet it's more an agonising chore
As she looks back through her memories,tears begin to fall
Beyond the silence of a moonlit night,her prayers are carried to the stars
With misty eyes she whispers to him "please take me to where you are"
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Left Behind
Contributed by
LovingWhispers
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Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 08:00:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Beyond the silence of a moonlit night,her prayers are carried to the stars
Within her heart,a mournful sound,the longing of dreams afar
Loneliness wraps around her,cloaks her faded withering soul
Held captive by the memories,bound in pain and its control
All around her lie the remnants of a life that she once shared
The spirit he set free, now dies broken in despair
Lifeless eyes without a light,drift across the wooden floor
As she relives the nights they danced to promises of more
By the window on a table,of redwood and fine lace
There stares at her a reminder,another time another place
Back when dreams were young and his love had been her breath
When all they needed was each other and all they knew was happiness
Now she breathes alone,yet it's more an agonising chore
As she looks back through her memories,tears begin to fall
Beyond the silence of a moonlit night,her prayers are carried to the stars
With misty eyes she whispers to him "please take me to where you are"
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LovingWhispers
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2004-07-02 08:00:08]
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Re: Left Behind
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by GeorgeJamesDelgado on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 08:06:22 AM AEST
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God this is so very beautiful...
I'm losing my love right now because I can't measure up to her religious friends...and when I read your beautiful poem, I know exactly how you feel.. I have tears in my eyes right now...at least someone knows how I feel during this crushing time
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Re: Left Behind
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 08:23:03 AM AEST
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Very emotional description. I loved this poem. You have a good style.
Kimberly |
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Re: Left Behind
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by WoodyMc44 on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 08:47:04 AM AEST
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| Very good, I truly enjoyed this and the message it sends. God Bless, Woody |
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Re: Left Behind
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by pixie on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 10:36:23 AM AEST
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very well written poem, great write,
pixie xx |
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Re: Left Behind
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by shelby on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 11:19:04 AM AEST
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Sharon this made me cry and I just cant have tears falling from your beautiful eyes dear friend light will be coming to you soon very soon then those tears will be dried and a song of happiness will forever dance in your life hold on its coming soon
Love you
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: Left Behind
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by blueheart on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 01:35:11 AM AEST
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Oh this is a lovely write.
The sadness is so well depicted. Very well written. |
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Re: Left Behind
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by sweetangeluk on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 05:29:17 AM AEST
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How I love your poetry you have such a talent.
I am crying buckets of tears now just finished reading the phonecall. Oh dear I could fill an ocean this morning with my tears.
Love to you and your family
So beautiful as always
love Sweetangelukxxxxx |
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Re: Left Behind
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 04:41:15 PM AEST
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Sadness carries the tears of loving whispers to the heavens. May you find comfort in their healing powers. Tears heal as do hearts. Find happiness....oneday...once again.
Angel always...joni |
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Re: Left Behind
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by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 05:52:31 PM AEST
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Tragically sad, yet penned with such incredible beauty.
Very well done
Roses
Larry |
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Re: Left Behind
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by arden on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 10:05:12 AM AEST
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i am left truely speechless.
where do i start to give this poem its praise?
your verse was spellbinding, so flawless and graceful. your use of words was beautiful. and it tells such a sad heartbreaking story. i wish i could write like this. so beautiful, i loved every word.
5 stars.
Arden |
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Re: Left Behind
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by Gentledove on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 05:09:19 AM AEST
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A very touching heartfelt write.
Gentledove |
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Re: Left Behind
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by andrewjones12 on
Tuesday, 20th July 2010 @ 08:06:37 AM AEST
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i love this peice, you have such talent.
-andrew |
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Re: Left Behind
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by NathanPaul on
Tuesday, 20th July 2010 @ 01:04:58 PM AEST
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| Expressing democile and ones desperation for the geater more. I like this one. Well done. |
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Re: Left Behind
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 6th January 2011 @ 01:51:19 AM AEST
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I think if he could respond to this he'd tell her something like, "All in due time". I think when they pass on they can understand the grieving but they want us to be happy...here...for now. :)
An excellent beautiful write.
Thank you,
Tim |
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