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Array ( [sid] => 54486 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => my eyes open [time] => 2004-07-02 04:57:52 [hometext] => well this is a lost love pome.. but im not so sure this kinda loss was what they had in mind.. 2badd there aint a [bodytext] => hmm.. sumthin i rote after a breakup.. lookin back.. somehow this pome kinda makes those times seem worse.. nah.. but they cant have have been.. c..im still standin.. alone.. but standin..

Surprising that
with these eyes closed
i see much more
than i did before

that isnt me
deep down in ur eyes
im bereft of a place
in that soul of ice

each spoken word
seems filled with vile
"if u love me..."
so much like a ploy

holdin u close
cudnt mattr no more
cuz sumthins come
between us both

hows it that
whats good from afar
can be so far
from good somehow

surprisin u
arnt the one i love
so was i dreamin
with my eyes open??
..g

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 22 [informant] => coldestflame [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

my eyes open

Contributed by coldestflame on Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 04:57:52 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

hmm.. sumthin i rote after a breakup.. lookin back.. somehow this pome kinda makes those times seem worse.. nah.. but they cant have have been.. c..im still standin.. alone.. but standin..

Surprising that
with these eyes closed
i see much more
than i did before

that isnt me
deep down in ur eyes
im bereft of a place
in that soul of ice

each spoken word
seems filled with vile
"if u love me..."
so much like a ploy

holdin u close
cudnt mattr no more
cuz sumthins come
between us both

hows it that
whats good from afar
can be so far
from good somehow

surprisin u
arnt the one i love
so was i dreamin
with my eyes open??
..g

Copyright © coldestflame ... [ 2004-07-02 04:57:52]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: my eyes open (User Rating: 1 )
by hooray_its_jen on Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 08:23:53 AM AEST
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wonderful poem, keep up the good work. Thanks for sharing with us.

Re: my eyes open (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 02:33:29 AM AEST
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great write:) hugs n' love nessa

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