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ready to be found.
i am finally ready
to put my feet on the ground.

But please don't forget
that my name is tina not nicole.
i am fragile and weak
just a battered soul.

i've been through so much
yet you still will not see
the little girl hidden
deep inside of me.

It took a long time before
i decided to give you my heart,
but be careful with it
It was black from the start.

So here i leave it with you
take care of it as i have done
for now you have two
and i have none. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 173 [topic] => 48 [informant] => eternityandaday4u [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Dear Boy

Contributed by eternityandaday4u on Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 12:43:41 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

i think that i am ready
ready to be found.
i am finally ready
to put my feet on the ground.

But please don't forget
that my name is tina not nicole.
i am fragile and weak
just a battered soul.

i've been through so much
yet you still will not see
the little girl hidden
deep inside of me.

It took a long time before
i decided to give you my heart,
but be careful with it
It was black from the start.

So here i leave it with you
take care of it as i have done
for now you have two
and i have none.

Copyright © eternityandaday4u ... [ 2004-07-02 00:43:41]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Dear Boy (User Rating: 1 )
by positivelypurple on Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 01:05:58 AM AEST
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Very nice write...we are often guarded in a new relationship and you express this nicely.

Re: Dear Boy (User Rating: 1 )
by hooray_its_jen on Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 08:27:35 AM AEST
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wonderful poem, I enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work, you've got a lot of talent.

~Jenna

Re: Dear Boy (User Rating: 1 )
by desireemiote on Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 09:08:18 PM AEST
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great poem. i can see it happening. I especially love the last two lines.

"now you have two
and I have none"

Ive written many poems about handing over a heart but never used that analogy... i absolutely love it!

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