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Array ( [sid] => 54459 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Rapid Loss Of Hope In Love [time] => 2004-07-01 23:10:33 [hometext] => This poem is to all the lying b****'s out there who gain power over watching people hurt. [bodytext] => Today another day wasted.
Plastered to the floor I slowly arise.
Too much of my despise your not there.
You said you would be here for me.
All I hear are your lies and false hopes.

With this veil I hide in vain.
This is the essence of my pain.
I never had nothing to gain.
But everything to lose to you.

I wished you were here.
Now I pray that your gone.
You left me for now and ever.
To me your dead and never really existed at all.
You were only apart of me.
A figment of my immagination.

Now I scream out at all of my fears.
Wasted years with my troubled past.
For when the time comes I wont hold back.
With all my rage you'll be stuffed inside a cage.

So when you arise from your sweet vanity.
You wont find me lying next to you.
I will be travelling upon the mountain top.
And ***** on your grave.
Because tru;y I am the last one alive. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 193 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Mortis-Dark [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

A Rapid Loss Of Hope In Love

Contributed by Mortis-Dark on Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 11:10:33 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Today another day wasted.
Plastered to the floor I slowly arise.
Too much of my despise your not there.
You said you would be here for me.
All I hear are your lies and false hopes.

With this veil I hide in vain.
This is the essence of my pain.
I never had nothing to gain.
But everything to lose to you.

I wished you were here.
Now I pray that your gone.
You left me for now and ever.
To me your dead and never really existed at all.
You were only apart of me.
A figment of my immagination.

Now I scream out at all of my fears.
Wasted years with my troubled past.
For when the time comes I wont hold back.
With all my rage you'll be stuffed inside a cage.

So when you arise from your sweet vanity.
You wont find me lying next to you.
I will be travelling upon the mountain top.
And ***** on your grave.
Because tru;y I am the last one alive.

Copyright © Mortis-Dark ... [ 2004-07-01 23:10:33]
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Re: A Rapid Loss Of Hope In Love (User Rating: 1 )
by MLCstar on Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 12:13:00 AM AEST
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The best thing about writing, especially poetry, is that you get to tell off the people that hurt you the most. Not a bad write.

Re: A Rapid Loss Of Hope In Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Kirby on Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 09:27:55 PM AEST
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This was a very deep poem and greatly written and wonderful. I loved this poem. Keep writing like this and it will get you far. Love::::Kirby

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