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Array ( [sid] => 54455 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You used Me [time] => 2004-07-01 22:08:43 [hometext] => I wrote this poem for a guy i use to date i loved him but it turned out he didn't love me he used me for my body even though i have a bf i still get depressed about him please vote and comment [bodytext] => You were just like another boy
playing me as a toy

I cried
and I tried

to move on from you
but I didn't think it could be true

that you used me
could this really be

but it's all the same
in this game

full of all these lies
with all of my cries

I watch the world go by
as I cry

thinking about you
makes me feel blue

I prayed day and night
that everything would be alright

all my thoughts are fading away
thinking of that day

I was with you
why did this have to be true

I was so happy
and never felt crappy

but when you told me
I didn't think it could be

you told me you didn't love me
why couldn't I see

I was so hurt
after that you treated me like dirt

I'm sitting here crying
slowly dying

thanks a lot
for the thought

of a broken heart
with this dart

through all of the pain
when nothing is sane

my world fell into a crumble
while you watched me as I tumble

I will never forget you
and how this is true

you used me
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You used Me

Contributed by adamsbabygurlie on Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 10:08:43 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

You were just like another boy
playing me as a toy

I cried
and I tried

to move on from you
but I didn't think it could be true

that you used me
could this really be

but it's all the same
in this game

full of all these lies
with all of my cries

I watch the world go by
as I cry

thinking about you
makes me feel blue

I prayed day and night
that everything would be alright

all my thoughts are fading away
thinking of that day

I was with you
why did this have to be true

I was so happy
and never felt crappy

but when you told me
I didn't think it could be

you told me you didn't love me
why couldn't I see

I was so hurt
after that you treated me like dirt

I'm sitting here crying
slowly dying

thanks a lot
for the thought

of a broken heart
with this dart

through all of the pain
when nothing is sane

my world fell into a crumble
while you watched me as I tumble

I will never forget you
and how this is true

you used me
this could really be

Copyright © adamsbabygurlie ... [ 2004-07-01 22:08:43]
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Re: You used Me (User Rating: 1 )
by brokenwings on Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 10:16:53 PM AEST
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i am now in tears because i have lived that too many times... unfortunitly it is so true... alot of men are dogs and emotion scares them... beautiful poem...

tasha

Re: You used Me (User Rating: 1 )
by LoVeLy_4_StEvE on Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 11:24:20 PM AEST
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I've had that happen to me before to.. I'm sorry that it happend... But it was a very good write... I enjoyed..

Love *N* Stuff
~*Lovely*~

Re: You used Me (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 06:59:14 AM AEST
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very emotional, thanks for sharing this with us all, I have never been used, so I can only imagine how you must feel ..... unfortunatly there are people like this which we will meet in our lives, but you and youyr new fella just concentrate on the future you have together....

pixie xx

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