Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	01-June 11:42:14 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 54427 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => No safety [time] => 2004-07-01 20:12:59 [hometext] => Ever feel unwanted?? yeah its my whole life story.. hope you enjoy [bodytext] => Far from the safety

Slipping towards the obscurity

Nothing but wasted images

Memories that determine to haunt me

Standing with eyes closed shut

Separation within..minimum pain

Hasty movements gone to vanish me

Injudicious thoughts come closer

Singing dreams inside my head

Listening to this voice in the back of my head

Dusk till dawn

Something keeps on talking to me consciously

Finding myself in places with names but no faces

Taking the fall rock hard

No help heaving me out of flames

Constant apprehension of the truth

Just a simple minded nuisance

I just wish i didn't feel like there was something i missed

I would give it all away

Just to have a covered place

And someone to go home to
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 195 [topic] => 13 [informant] => neglected1 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

No safety

Contributed by neglected1 on Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 08:12:59 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Far from the safety

Slipping towards the obscurity

Nothing but wasted images

Memories that determine to haunt me

Standing with eyes closed shut

Separation within..minimum pain

Hasty movements gone to vanish me

Injudicious thoughts come closer

Singing dreams inside my head

Listening to this voice in the back of my head

Dusk till dawn

Something keeps on talking to me consciously

Finding myself in places with names but no faces

Taking the fall rock hard

No help heaving me out of flames

Constant apprehension of the truth

Just a simple minded nuisance

I just wish i didn't feel like there was something i missed

I would give it all away

Just to have a covered place

And someone to go home to

Copyright © neglected1 ... [ 2004-07-01 20:12:59]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: No safety (User Rating: 1 )
by hawaii06 on Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 08:15:11 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

This is very sad ywt very well written and many people go through this..One day you will have someone to come home to and you'll love them forever...You'll see.....JUST WAIT....Your time will come soon...
Love,
jamie

Re: No safety (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 08:22:23 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

This bought tears to my heart, and memories I wish stayed buried, Yet I have read it twice and each time, brings forth more images of heart breaking sadness,
But Like the last comment you will oneday have someone to love who will love you back and who will be there at home waiting with open arms and a heart to match.

So you take care you hear.

Re: No safety (User Rating: 1 )
by sayoko on Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 08:53:12 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

This is a very sad poem but wonderful to read. It's an awful feeling to feel unwanted. Hope you find whatever makes you happy.

Re: No safety (User Rating: 1 )
by Mortis-Dark on Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 11:20:27 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

This is the feeling I get alot. To know that your unwanted is a feeling with the upmost power to bring suicidal tendicies. smashing write.

(V)ortis-Dark

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com