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Array ( [sid] => 54423 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Who is this girl, nobody but me... [time] => 2004-07-01 19:41:07 [hometext] => the girl who is but I wish wasnt me...read and please comment thanks... [bodytext] => I awoke to the sound of crying,
to find the happy blood of hate
dripping down her wrists.
And the never-ending rain
running the length of her cheek,
over her never smiled lips.

She feels so worthless, so hurt
and as if she’s already dead.
Maybe she is, she hasn’t any emotions,
and its painful for her to think the
destructing thoughts that she
beholds in her confused mind.

With her freshly slashed wrists,
I ask myself who is this girl?
Who is she? She couldn’t be anybody but me…
And I wonder… Just wonder,
What would it feel like to be free?
[comments] => 7 [counter] => 167 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Living_In_My_Dream [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Who is this girl, nobody but me...

Contributed by Living_In_My_Dream on Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 07:41:07 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

I awoke to the sound of crying,
to find the happy blood of hate
dripping down her wrists.
And the never-ending rain
running the length of her cheek,
over her never smiled lips.

She feels so worthless, so hurt
and as if she’s already dead.
Maybe she is, she hasn’t any emotions,
and its painful for her to think the
destructing thoughts that she
beholds in her confused mind.

With her freshly slashed wrists,
I ask myself who is this girl?
Who is she? She couldn’t be anybody but me…
And I wonder… Just wonder,
What would it feel like to be free?

Copyright Â© Living_In_My_Dream ... [ 2004-07-01 19:41:07]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Who is this girl, nobody but me... (User Rating: 1 )
by hawaii06 on Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 07:48:51 PM AEST
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Very sad write....people go through this everyday and all you have to do is find someone that you feel as though you can talk to and let your emotions out....that worked for me when I almost went insane...and that person is still my good friend to this day!
Love,
jamie

Re: Who is this girl, nobody but me... (User Rating: 1 )
by JennyFruFru on Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 08:03:50 PM AEST
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wow so so sad.. and yet i can see myself in your words... nicely done :)

Re: Who is this girl, nobody but me... (User Rating: 1 )
by neglected1 on Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 08:16:15 PM AEST
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Painful but true.. i was once in this position .. you just cant keep things locked up inside .. great write though.. i wish the best luck to you

tugs and hugs

~neglected1~
You'll see the pain will soon end

Re: Who is this girl, nobody but me... (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 08:17:09 PM AEST
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this one was very heart wrenching, so much loss and sadness, you portrayed such imagary, it bought to my eyes the pain within.
I hope you find the happiness you wish for and the smile you have lost.
Beautifully composed you have a talant to draw in a reader.

Please take care,
For it would be beyond sad to lose such poetic minded person.

Re: Who is this girl, nobody but me... (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 09:16:24 PM AEST
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I can feel the deep saddness on this flow....well done.

Re: Who is this girl, nobody but me... (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 07:27:00 AM AEST
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great write, very sad, .....

pixie xx

Re: Who is this girl, nobody but me... (User Rating: 1 )
by grip-wth-broken-fingers on Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 03:14:54 PM AEST
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i liek this one to its nice reminds me of myself lol its got alot of feeling in it thank you xgripx

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