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Array ( [sid] => 54397 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => hurt feelings [time] => 2004-07-01 16:09:40 [hometext] => A friend of mine wrote this though to shy to start a page of his own. i think it is really good though he doesnt. so please comment on it so i can make him feel better about his writing [bodytext] => bad me bad girls **** up the world
i hate her so, love 2 c her glow.
but her glowing is at me her friends hating me tormenting me
not leting me be free for my feelings for thy.

she makes me feel like **** and i fall to bits.
but i pick up an carry on but never with quite the same song
she takes the words rips them up
chucks them at me an ***** off
doesnt even give a tose.

she **** my mind
made me blind
blind 2 the people that love me and care
made me almost kill myself because life aint fair.
well hey it aint fair never is and wont be
you just have to learn to be free.
free yourself from the world and priceless things like perls
but you never can shes always there singing words in curls.
curls of hate and pain
that send you insane.

but thats a bad girls life
**** ppl over like a knife.
stab in twisted around
makes the guy frown.
hurts him an brings him down
makes him wish everything is dirt brown
because this guy just lost his crown

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hurt feelings

Contributed by little_genna on Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 04:09:40 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

bad me bad girls **** up the world
i hate her so, love 2 c her glow.
but her glowing is at me her friends hating me tormenting me
not leting me be free for my feelings for thy.

she makes me feel like **** and i fall to bits.
but i pick up an carry on but never with quite the same song
she takes the words rips them up
chucks them at me an ***** off
doesnt even give a tose.

she **** my mind
made me blind
blind 2 the people that love me and care
made me almost kill myself because life aint fair.
well hey it aint fair never is and wont be
you just have to learn to be free.
free yourself from the world and priceless things like perls
but you never can shes always there singing words in curls.
curls of hate and pain
that send you insane.

but thats a bad girls life
**** ppl over like a knife.
stab in twisted around
makes the guy frown.
hurts him an brings him down
makes him wish everything is dirt brown
because this guy just lost his crown

Copyright © little_genna ... [ 2004-07-01 16:09:40]
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Re: hurt feelings (User Rating: 1 )
by neglected1 on Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 04:13:19 PM AEST
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Your friend is right.. nothing is never fair..
people try to get to you and it seems like this girl did so.. you jus need to respect yourself and open up to let expressions out... you shouldnt be afraid to create something of your own.. this was a great write and im sure there is more to come..

~neglected1~

Re: hurt feelings (User Rating: 1 )
by _Raspberry_ on Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 04:36:05 PM AEST
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Nothing that gets your feelings out is ever bad. It's not fair, nothing is, but if something creative and good can come out of it, then it was worth it....

Re: hurt feelings (User Rating: 1 )
by Lost_Shadow on Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 06:59:39 PM AEST
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It doesn't matter whetehr or not you find something you create is good, it's all the emotion that is put into it. Me, I tend to actually feel people's emotion's from written word or spoken, especially sung. Empathy can be greatful, but sometimes it sucks. Not everyone wants others to know how they feel deep down inside. So now I tend to try to kep my mouth shut.

Feel free to let your emotions go. Keep on writing, start a page of your own. And if you still think that it's not good enough lighten yourself up with the next one you will do will sound better. Even if you have to say that after the each one.

You can only go from worse to better, as there is no such thing as worser.

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