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Array ( [sid] => 54390 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Best Friends [time] => 2004-07-01 15:25:57 [hometext] => [bodytext] => when im with you
all my problems
soar away
like frightened birds

you give me
the love and comfort
i need in my life

you know
that i love you, too
and id do anything
for you

but youre like
a five thousand piece puzzle
and at times i just want to give up
but i dont

i keep trying
to put your pieces together
but its so hard
without the box

alot of people
dont even know you
and they judge you right away
but i know something they dont know

your heart is big
but you only allow in
those who can decipher your code
and once theyre let into the
golden gates of your heart,
theyre flooded with love,
trust, honesty
and care

im glad i was one
of those lucky people [comments] => 3 [counter] => 205 [topic] => 16 [informant] => monkey [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )

Best Friends

Contributed by monkey on Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 03:25:57 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

when im with you
all my problems
soar away
like frightened birds

you give me
the love and comfort
i need in my life

you know
that i love you, too
and id do anything
for you

but youre like
a five thousand piece puzzle
and at times i just want to give up
but i dont

i keep trying
to put your pieces together
but its so hard
without the box

alot of people
dont even know you
and they judge you right away
but i know something they dont know

your heart is big
but you only allow in
those who can decipher your code
and once theyre let into the
golden gates of your heart,
theyre flooded with love,
trust, honesty
and care

im glad i was one
of those lucky people

Copyright © monkey ... [ 2004-07-01 15:25:57]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Best Friends (User Rating: 1 )
by neglected1 on Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 03:27:57 PM AEST
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Im glad you got to that point.. Great write

Luck to you

~neglected1~

Re: Best Friends (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 03:37:21 PM AEST
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very nice poem..

pixie xx

Re: Best Friends (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 04:27:05 PM AEST
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wow i can relate to this about my closest friend. he is the only person that i can relye on no matter what. its amazing. such a great write.

love and hugs
gen xx

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