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There's so many doors to unlock with this one little key
You're trying to help, but you're just getting in the way
Please just stop where you're at and stay

I promise I'll come around when I'm done
I just want to live and have fun
But you're stressing me out
I'm starting to hate you without a doubt

You were never forced to be superior
While trying to fix a troubled interior
I know you just want what's best for me
I'm not going to beg and plead for you to leave me be

Stay out of my way
At least for today
I need to find myself on my own
In the end, you'll be surprised by how much I've grown [comments] => 5 [counter] => 161 [topic] => 6 [informant] => Colleen [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

I'm Trying to Find Me

Contributed by Colleen on Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 01:11:10 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

I'm trying to figure out exactly who I want to be
There's so many doors to unlock with this one little key
You're trying to help, but you're just getting in the way
Please just stop where you're at and stay

I promise I'll come around when I'm done
I just want to live and have fun
But you're stressing me out
I'm starting to hate you without a doubt

You were never forced to be superior
While trying to fix a troubled interior
I know you just want what's best for me
I'm not going to beg and plead for you to leave me be

Stay out of my way
At least for today
I need to find myself on my own
In the end, you'll be surprised by how much I've grown

Copyright © Colleen ... [ 2004-07-01 13:11:10]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I'm Trying to Find Me (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 01:22:43 PM AEST
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Jus cut loose and be yourself.
good writing.
No one has the right to put demands on u like that.
good luck.
luv, huggs,
emy

Re: I'm Trying to Find Me (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 01:53:10 PM AEST
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we all need time to discover who we really are... great poem

pixie xx

Re: I'm Trying to Find Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 05:45:18 PM AEST
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Excellent write!

Jenni

Re: I'm Trying to Find Me (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 10:23:15 PM AEST
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A great write on self searching. Wonderful. :)

Re: I'm Trying to Find Me (User Rating: 1 )
by KishaLovesCare126 on Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 06:12:40 PM AEST
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Hi! I can relate to this poem its what I'm doing to do right now.

w/luv 4 lyfe
Care

ps good write I loved it

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